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Efusive 01-06-04 11:28 PM

Verstyle vs Aragorn
 
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Good Luck!!

Quelude 01-06-04 11:50 PM

You must have 300 posts to poll






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Quelude 01-07-04 01:02 AM

Uppin this shit for Verstyle to see......






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Efusive 01-07-04 01:21 AM

Checking in..................................
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I'll post in a few...Good luck to you!!

Efusive 01-07-04 01:44 AM

Enjoy :) sorry for the delay

your necks covered with sweat, so i gotta Wring ya Throat
cuz your last battle verse didnt even get a Single Vote!
you cant bring the dope flows son, so Stop Fakin Man
cuz noones felt your shit since that Prostate Exam
or that Cavity search, when ya Dentist was Drunk
you a Sorry Judge of skill cuz ya Sentences Suck
not to mention ya luck, its hard like you Pretend to Be
you Start'ed offendin me so i'll put an End to it
see, if people said your tight, man your Being Lied To
Aragorn being dope is like a Seeing Eye Shrew
hes in Junior High School, so why he gonna Test a Pro?
like yo, ...do you like my rhymes?, circle Yes or No
he couldnt bless a Flo if he was Griffith Joyner's Pastor
like choosing clowns the outcome is Diss Appointed Laughter
you bold comin after me with ya wack Computer styles
hurt and confused like 'huuuhh??' as I smack this Juvinile
this child aint even foolin me, you get Beaten Brutally
cuz Speakin Truthfully i'll stop you from Reachin Puberty
im teachin youth to flee, cuz really now youll be Splittin Fast
only went down in history cuz you was suckin Dick in Class
must have a Itchy ass the way this Bum is Jock in Me

Finisher:

I wouldn’t feel your rhymes if I was a bitch on my back with my legs spread
wide and your punches were inside an ultra sensitive condom

Quelude 01-07-04 02:08 AM

O.K....personals were all bullshit...I'm older than you and my last three battles I won...But W/e..POst in a sec...

Quelude 01-07-04 02:30 AM

*Like the Jay-Z cut "Jigga"*

WIGGA.... what's my muthafucking name?
WIGGA.... and who I'm rolling with huh?
MY NIGGA'S... Nigga's better get it right
Wigga's better get it right..WHO? (2x)
http://www.wiggaz.com/pics3.htm

Verstyle...You never been the brightest apple... but you are now.
You probably attract pidgeons... from a mile around....
To tell you the truth... I never seen a brighter fruit..
Your cliche' gangsta...like french braids and dickey suits..
Murder your crew...the thug rocking the rag too...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104387
A glimpse of his fitted tee... let's me know he's a fag too!
I'm sonning you...But Open House and Baseball games I never come
I'm embarrassed to show other parents my bisexual son
Actually.... you came in this world by C-Section...
He was the first to OWN you... in member's pic section
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/for...p?s=&forumid=34
Attract the ladies?..I guess....birds of a feather flock together
And I been iller than you since Bobby and Whitney got together!
I was born in eighty one...You came late in eighty six...
In ninety eight I had a kid, and you...discovered your dick
I'm in another generation.....not to mention weight class
You prewrote...no personals...can't throw ya punches straight man!
How you got twelve and zero is a mystery kid....
Probably rematched Sublime D to get like eight of his wins...

Quelude 01-07-04 02:31 AM

All my personals were real.......





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Meters 01-07-04 02:43 AM

This was a good battle, i enjoyed both verses. The breakdown will apply.
Punches- Verstyle (more consistent and clever, hit harder and set up better)
Personals- Aragorn ( A SLEW of personals, some very funny, Aragorn takes this with ease)
Flow- Verstyle (I rapped both and the multis he used helped give it a real freestyle flow feel, nice)
Structure- Verstyle (Not an important category to me but it helped him land punches and maintain flow here)
Win- Verstyle (He won more solid categories, he takes this.)

Nice battle though, i really enjoyed it. Good drop guys.

Efusive 01-07-04 03:20 AM

Upping #1 for some honest votes on this battle......................
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Eki 01-07-04 04:27 AM

Verse took this with better punches. Arigon came strong to i was just feeling Verses shit more. Aragon had good personals but fucked up structure and flow. But a good battle.

Vote Verse

Efusive 01-07-04 04:58 AM

upping #2 for honest vote............
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It 01-07-04 05:48 AM

Enjoy sorry for the delay

your necks covered with sweat, so i gotta Wring ya Throat
cuz your last battle verse didnt even get a Single Vote!
you cant bring the dope flows son, so Stop Fakin Man
cuz noones felt your shit since that Prostate Exam
or that Cavity search, when ya Dentist was Drunk
you a Sorry Judge of skill cuz ya Sentences Suck
not to mention ya luck, its hard like you Pretend to Be
you Start'ed offendin me so i'll put an End to it
see, if people said your tight, man your Being Lied To
Aragorn being dope is like a Seeing Eye Shrew
hes in Junior High School, so why he gonna Test a Pro?
like yo, ...do you like my rhymes?, circle Yes or No
he couldnt bless a Flo if he was Griffith Joyner's Pastor
like choosing clowns the outcome is Diss Appointed Laughter
you bold comin after me with ya wack Computer styles
hurt and confused like 'huuuhh??' as I smack this Juvinile
this child aint even foolin me, you get Beaten Brutally
cuz Speakin Truthfully i'll stop you from Reachin Puberty
im teachin youth to flee, cuz really now youll be Splittin Fast
only went down in history cuz you was suckin Dick in Class
must have a Itchy ass the way this Bum is Jock in Me

Finisher:

I wouldn’t feel your rhymes if I was a bitch on my back with my legs spread
wide and your punches were inside an ultra sensitive condom
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yo I give this a 9/10 score...^
nice Vocab...
good Hitting punches...
liked the style...
way good werdplay...
yea overall good verse...
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*Like the Jay-Z cut "Jigga"*

WIGGA.... what's my muthafucking name?
WIGGA.... and who I'm rolling with huh?
MY NIGGA'S... Nigga's better get it right
Wigga's better get it right..WHO? (2x)
http://www.wiggaz.com/pics3.htm

Verstyle...You never been the brightest apple... but you are now.
You probably attract pidgeons... from a mile around....
To tell you the truth... I never seen a brighter fruit..
Your cliche' gangsta...like french braids and dickey suits..
Murder your crew...the thug rocking the rag too...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104387
A glimpse of his fitted tee... let's me know he's a fag too!
I'm sonning you...But Open House and Baseball games I never come
I'm embarrassed to show other parents my bisexual son
Actually.... you came in this world by C-Section...
He was the first to OWN you... in member's pic section
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/for...p?s=&forumid=34
Attract the ladies?..I guess....birds of a feather flock together
And I been iller than you since Bobby and Whitney got together!
I was born in eighty one...You came late in eighty six...
In ninety eight I had a kid, and you...discovered your dick
I'm in another generation.....not to mention weight class
You prewrote...no personals...can't throw ya punches straight man!
How you got twelve and zero is a mystery kid....
Probably rematched Sublime D to get like eight of his wins...
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yo no doubt this was dope...
but the link shit is played...
no 1 does that no more...
overall good werdplay...
and aight punches...
plus some ok personals...
8/10 score ratio...

Overall vote/Verstyle...
peace...

Efusive 01-07-04 02:19 PM

upping for some more honest to get this battle up and overwith.......................................... ..............................

explicitot 01-07-04 02:23 PM

close close word. imma have to say in all fairness "verstyle" RIPPED DAT BiotCH!!!!!!!
better punches, multies, wordplay, and overall better flowin diss
peace
vote=verstyle
plz drop a vote

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