007 [Vs.] Twizzle
 

Cant remember your rules...blah
usual shit tho

No D/R, Bitin, Recycling....
Reply's MUST explain their votes..no 1 line reply's

I'm spittin first... Seven check in when you peep this

:thefinger:

....oh and its also

10 lines...No Feedin...No Swayin...and no crew votes...

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Lets, key this up for today...



Started Battling again, Left SS because he was str8 wack
Attempted to write emotionally...and had a heart attack
eatin Mc's? kid's just a snack, i'll leave you wrecked
I'll smack you into celestial orbit...
...and gladly forget your dialect
Got respect?...hell no, no-one know's or gives a fuck who you are
And when it comes to verses...
you own more stretch lines than an atkin's diet Bizzare..
Hurrah! hunting you the fuck down like english upper classes
And when it comes to gaybar's...you got all the backstage passes
Now This n00b is done..sonned like the rest w/ no regret
Only thing is, your so wack this is the only W that i'll forget...

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i suppose i need to try, against some one with 34 wins,
off me you gets sword n axes, instead of needles n pins,
i spit like a wordsearch, an keep ya scrambled an confused,
shift, an '/' is what i make of your punches, u got no pimp juice,
there was no, battle callout, just permisson to be beat,
a name like twizzle stix, ur not keepin ur wackness discrete,
your lines are never on track, after i de-rail ur train of thought,
girls love you, playin tennis, is the only time he gets to court*
like shootin stars, it aint long till you completely vanish,
if i were the leader of wits end, you position i wud banish.



*court, when you see a girl, like go out with her

Kinda weak battle here...

Very soft punches from 007. (pimp juice, come on!)
Ya shoulda known you'd have ta come harder than this.
Wordplay and format were on mark, it's really just your punches I'm bitchin about.

Twizzle came like I expected...
Hard, witty shots that hurt...
But this line was borrowed or recycled or flat out bitten.

"No one knows or gives a fuck who you are"

I KNOW I saw that very, very recently.

Still, despite that, ya verse was flat out better...
Harder, wittier and more complex, better personals.

Peace

Holla back...

Kill me!!!

well i didnt intentionally use it...
its not exactly a unique phrase tho..
anyway i can assure you i didnt bite it
i havent read or battled in a while so..meh

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Aight.

Below average battle here.
Twizzle came decent with some aight wordplay and some good punches.
007 came kind of weak with some punches that really didnt connect at all. The wordplay just didnt go with the punches at some point. You need to learn how to put a better verse together.

Vote- Twizzle for coming with a better executed verse

Get a mod to poll my vote.

Dont have 5 wins... lmao

Although I do have over 100 on this site



Poll voted, Editted
-Edicius

Uppin.......

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waitin for my death,
BI Detained aint been in yet, an gave me his usual i hate you, without showing it off obviusly vote.......................................