Zarbon Vs Joker
 

10 lines
no crew
no hate
no feedin
no d/r
u drop first

im checking in bro,i have to do some shit now thats important ,i will spit in a little while..so that gives you awhile to think of some shit to type up...peace

^^ ight dont take to long ......checkin in
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spitten with caution so prolific when rippin this soft kid..
cuz his only sign of hope had detour written across it..
toss shit, lights out when it gets ugly if you decide to get smotherd..
like me taking shots in the dark inside your mother..
brother id laugh but hell,its sad to kill this kid who bloats at delis
whose punches are lost on me,like his dick below his belly..
its as if im flapping up in the skies to split him in angles..
cuz im steady fucking him up like promiscuous angels..
joker your rep is figment of fact proved,and you pulling triggers
on gats too,is the biggest draw back viewed since a 50 cent tatoo..

Zarbo..after this battle ur seein more blood than a tampon
1 punch ur gone “doublin “ ya losses like I’m james bond
This nigga has no flow like a desert..his shit is dry as hell
I got so much barz I got u feelin like ur locked in a jail cell
Ur not goin to prevail, this shit aint even no competition
Ur on a mission,to get Koed like losin is your disposition
Gettin played like hilary Clinton, cause ur rhymes blow
Nigga if ur tryna beat me u can at least have some flow
Nigga I aint even gotta drop hard to take this fuckin battle
ur chances slipped quick like when greeenbay beat seattle

UPPIN 4 VOTES DROP LINKS AND I"LL VOTE ON YOUR BATTLE
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joker wins for me, better structure n flow.....punches were more personal.....keep tha perfect score goin....

any chance u can vote honestly at mine please???
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104452

Joker took dis New b out and showed skills wiv good personals and good punches:-
Vote on dis please :-:- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103978

Zarbon - pretty good flow, vocab was ok, there was a lil wordplay, some of the multis were nice, feelin most of ur punches, not very much, if any, personals, decent opener, pretty good closer

Joker - flow was good, vocab was good, wordplay was ok, not very good though, like the line about how u got so many bars like a jail cell or somethin, punches didnt hit very hard, no personals, ok opener, wasnt feelin the closer at all

Conlcusion - joker takes this in flow, vocab, and multis, but zarbon takes this with harder hitting punches and better wordplay, so my vote goes to zarbon because punches win battles

VOTE - ZARBON

yo if u dont mind please return the favor with an honest opinion in my battle against lil' tagger

much appreciated..........

i would break down but Joker ruled this one better punchs and mutiles nothing really need to be worked on . for the other guys you punches dont makes snese at all mane no hating hit up my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...813#post1059813

peace

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104792

zarbon=shit was aite nice word but lines errr were not worded rite and no hard punches and metas didn't really like ur verse

joker=his shit was aite he came better and with a smoother flow and he came punches afta punch.....which he was more consistent

ok vote =joker and ima start doin this the hard way please vote on my battle and i will poll hollaz

Not tha greatest battle i've seen before but....

tha first 2 lines from zarbon was good then tha rest straight blew....tha last 2 lines didnt even rhyme 2gether....

Joker....Had some really played lines in there.....played.... but i followed yours better...more punches.... tha last line was aight...

so

vote-Joker

....keep elevating....

Joker took this with better flow and hes punches just connected harder. hes structure was a bit better to .
Zarbon man your shit wasnt bad, just i wasnt getting into it. Maybe try re-arranging your shit next time so it hits harder...

Vote- Joker

I took my time so can you return the fevour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104648