B.I.Detained Vs CarsonJetX2
 

10 lines max
1 hr to spit
no feedin
no hate
check in b4
good luck pz

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Verse Retracted becoz CarsonJet is a Pussy & deleted his
sig coz i dissed his ass about it

Feu-Xion was the only person to see
the real full battle..therefore he voted
fairly

so this battle does not stand pz

SO DONT VOTE

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BI Most Definitely Got This With Wittier And Better Punches......Carson Had Some Good Lines, Here Is A Quotable From You Both Though

First Line Was Tight, Good Shit Actually

LoL, Almost Missed The CrashinJet Thing Funny, Finders Fee Line Was Tight Too

Opener - Carson
Closer - BI
Punches - BI
Wordplay - BI
Personals - Carson
Vocab - Carson
Enjoyment - BI

Vote - BI

Honest Vote, Can You Two Peep Either My Battle With X Ecution Or Kaos

can't vote i'm in carson's crew but this was definitely a good battle....creative for both.....nice spits...

ite gr8 battle and versus from each props,

b.i- you had nice punches but lacked in flow and personals man, also better wordplay,

carson-good flow and good personals man, good structure and wity but hard punches.

overall- close shit but carson cus hit shit made me laugh and rolled of your tounge with consistensy,


plz hit this both of you with an honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105059 .thx...........pz

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hmmmmmmmm very, very close battle.

BI Detained- as usual very nice, very creative an an very good drop.



made me laugh,
the crashinjet line has been used before,


carsonjetx2- ONG i never seen you come as ill as this yet, nearly every line was witty an personal!!!






my vote carson he had everythin better, an his verse was on of those that you actually want to read, an not jus skim through!!!

ill battle props to both

Thanx 4 the votes
uppin 3rd
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plz man return the favor honest vote needed thx dogg http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105059 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,thx..............pz

ok, here it is:

Carson -
your opener was weak... leaning on a win from his unelevated past, yes, it's a personal, but almost everyone that battled him as Brix could say somethin like that (sorry Brix lol)

your punches were more bragging about yourself than hurting him... not too bad, but nothin great or dope

closer = sucked


B.I.Detained - weaker than I have seen lately, as a matter of fact, after reading it a second time... I think it stank. The punches were played and weak, the personals (if you call them that) were like flickin a booger instead of throwing a punch... all round just below what you are capable of. No offense, just honesty, I have to say vote = Carson.... maybe you will take this as an incentive to stay sharp and not let this happen again... show me one decent punch and prove me wrong.

sorry bro, you know I respect your skill but I have to be honest

vote = carson