The Diss..
 

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...342#post1063342
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...524#post1063524
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...566#post1063566

You see this newbie Likes to duck battles then talk about how im wack...
You have no idea..!!!!!

Rippen...

Warm up

I destroy with heat..and seek the weak..I -Stole his Marvel-
statues so how can this No Name character beat me..
He could script Talib Kweli and still not come with 'Quality'..
Im Discrete the way I DissaCreep..I set up a battle for him
and Crooked still hasn't dropped In weaks..
This will be a easy defeat..Floorless victory...because when
I knock him out his anatomy won't be concrete..
Now view Coorked's wack link....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103359

Getting Hot

He calls me a fag..I seen his last couple of battles and view
The comments on this queen of Drags.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103628
It's evidence all emcees says Comical only talks about Dicks..
So who's Gay..I Cock back bust Head and Spray..Wait I just
mention Cock...watch Comical, puts his mouth to my Jock..
You will never create Straight scripts..Ur a Crooked line spittin
to a period..Ur a broken Bitch..Hence because of your alias
you will remain with a female stench..

He's Dead

Your not equal..You stay being -Feeble-..No your not a -Vet-
that just wouldn't be -Comical- <(Lol damn)...Literally Kill you..
calling me whack..!! While you no show like strippers with No Ass..
Slide slash Dash..is him jerkin..This kat is a women..He should
battle for -Pink Slips- the way he stays in Drag Flurtin..Im
steady merkin...Why even waist another Line on this jerk..??
because like transparent objects I can see threw this chics
Skirt..........!!!



Boooooooooooooom!!!

Oh yes his name is Crooked Comical....now you can get my punches...

This was a pretty good diss, i liked some of the lines some were kinda wittie and some were just not to complex. But the overall structure flow etc was good i felt your flow got a little better on some lines which was cool but ovber all this was a steady and pretty good diss...keep it up

Return the faver...can you hit up one of my links...preferably the weathers art or the teenage eyes....thanks

Ty....

yes I will hit yours up...

oh yes and Uppin

Uppin....stop sleepin...

and critique

You didnt use my style correctly at all, most of the disses werent that hard .. all the 'comic' references you used got kind of old. DissACreep line was gay.

I didnt like it.

lol thanks for comment...
I thought it was good considering I keystyled it....was hard to me...

But ty..

..nice diss..kept it simple and it worked..simple wordplay..nice..

..vote on this..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104991