State Of Rap Pt.2 (Revised)
 

Funny How Nobody Noticed This...If I split it up...Rite down the middle..LOOK IT ALL MAKES SENSE!! Let's see any niggaz do dat..

hoes...Read it.

Look I'm Back Once Again,
And You Hurbs Joined When?
Claimin My Situations Played?
Your Flow'n'Structure In Disaray
My Ability Is Equal Dre's Rappin' Might
I Will Move Through Wit Ease
I'll Act Swiftly Like A Deadly Disease,
Yes I'm Arrogant But I Got The Skills To Prove It
Yo Niggas Deserve What Your Gunna Get
See Last Time I Dropped Yall Didn't Read
There Was A Point, A Planted Seed
Fucking Hurbs Continually Dickride
Future Birthplace Where Rap Died
Go Back To Ya Blasters & Discmans
He Was Always Motivated Never Disband
He Helped Other Niggaz Elevate
Didn't Care About Their Lyrical Weight
If He Taught Everything Properly
Didn't Think Twice, He Knew It Surely
Nigga READ THIS, Take It To Heart
You Could Be Where This Event Starts

Last Responses Simply Bullshit
Woudn't Know Dope Facin' It
Since Your Einstein, Write Somethin
You Are Finished, Simply A Has Bin
My Ego Constantly Inflates
I Encounter Problems, I Simply Obliterate
Nothin' In The Way Of What's Rightfully Mine
Step Aside, This Is My Shining Time
Lookout Niggaz I'm Plastered
My Style's Stunningly Mastered
All Judged Purely Techinical
The Problem's Still Full
Might Not Even Have A Single Punch
Breeding Grounds Of A Net Side Lunch
Listen To Pac At His Peak In Da Game
He Knew How To Achieve Greatness 'n' Fame
It Wasn't All For His Lonely Benefit
He Went Along & Upped His Shit
Than They Were Not As Good As Him
Continued To Venture On The Limb
We Need To Lead A Revolution
Where Rap Undergoes An Evolution

umm this was...blah what the hell is the concept???

seems like you just wanted to make fun of all the people
who read this and shit lol fucker!!!!!!

flow was decent
hardly any metas
imagery was decent
structure was meh

i dont know what to say to this except for...dont do it again!!

lol.

This was an alright open mic, you didn't do nearly as good as you did on the collab with surreal. I didn't really understand who you were trying to shit on. But I hope next time you will get that point across.

what good check my shit out

yall need to read State Of Rap Pt.1 and Pt.2 to understand this...check my sig...

..I'll keep it simple...'unique...