Brendan Vs. Hotdog
 

Verse due 1 hour after check in.
Blind battle.
14-20 lines.

I go first.

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Battle
 

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YO RDY?

Hotdog's a newbie with played words, his styles already antique
He could rap for 30 days - his rhymes would still be "week"
I'd say hotdog fell off, but he was never on top at all
record 0-0, his first battle will be his downfall
You ain't "hot, dog", I assure you that ain't even the case
You names a lie son, change it up, it should be replaced
call yourself "No skills," "Talentless," or "dick ridin newbie"
or maybe, "Wannabe Braveheat," or "Oscar Meyer groupie"
Dude's from Scotland, still a fag, just the European type
Dog... How you trying to battle me with a kilt and bagpipes?
This ain't Highlander but fuck it, I'll still decapitate you
Stick your head up your ass so it haw something to relate to
How can you expect to win, people see your name and it's done,
calling yourself "Hotdog" because you love putting your meat between buns.


Highlander is a movie/show about a guy from Scotland who has to decapitate poeple to kill them

Battle
 

Your nasty verse has just murdered the alphabet from A to Z//
your blind stares glares at my punchlines but cant see me//
I dont wanna be cold hearted but you and skill is far parted//
you could be a genius in real life but as soon as you try to bust a rhyme you get retarded//
this newbie tried to make a brilliant entrance but just stumbled through//
As soon as I touch my keyboard I have just lyricaly killed you//
you probably role and smoke up mold and fuzz just to get a raw buzz
sayin you a "never has been" is an understatement, your a "never was"
only if your daddy didn't go into the forest and masterbaited
dont pretend that you and smokey the bear aren't related
you spelt your name Brendan with 2 N's, I guess you aint really intellectual
everyone can bust cat in the hat rhymes, so dont act like you special
everyones elevatin in skill, I guess you lackin behind
I tried to describe your skill, but only "weak" came to mind
what your here still? I thought you got killed and reminded you aint ill
but hey, a blind man read your verse and thinks you got skill
my rhymes will murk you even If I just post one lette
just be yourself, cause it makes me look betterr
you now the king of internet shooters
He just registered, I see he found out they got internet on computers

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GOOD LUCK

aiiight....

brendon took this by punches. he had more and they hit harder...
i like that line about puttin his head up his ass... that was koo... hotdog you did better last night. i know you can come better than that dawgs


vote: brendon

ayo can you hit these up...
trying to get some fair and honest votes please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104842
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104887
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102425

yo vote on this battle of mines

breakdown; brendan took this battle.. he had wittier punchlines and funny shit that just had me laughing...

punchlines like this took the battle

"Hotdog's a newbie with played words, his styles already antique
He could rap for 30 days - his rhymes would still be "week"

"Dude's from Scotland, still a fag, just the European type
Dog... How you trying to battle me with a kilt and bagpipes?"

"How can you expect to win, people see your name and it's done,
calling yourself "Hotdog" because you love putting your meat between buns."


hotdog your verse wasnt really that bad but your disses seemed elementary compared to brendans brendan had more clever lines than you did

and what the fuck was up with this line dog.. do you even know how to spell brendan man

"you spelt your name Brendan with 2 N's, I guess you aint really intellectual"

also that smokey the bear line was weak dog

vote: brendan

by the way heres the link to the battle i forgot to post it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104996

WELL DONE
 

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brenden got this one he came wit harder punches, he had better flow, and he had better wordplay.........
vote brenden

hit dis one up plz

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=104979

I dont wanna be cold hearted but you and skill is far parted//
you could be a genius in real life but as soon as you try to bust a rhyme you get retarded//
omg ahahahah i like Hotdog
Vs was better plus brendan could have gotten way more personal
Vote=Hotdog

i feel that the newbie is the underdog of this battle fa real....Brendans verse was aiight and he had some punches...but some were pretty forced....the same with hotdog....but hotdog came wit some nice skill and multis in his verse....both together mad this battle mediocre....

vote : hotdog


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