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Quelude 01-08-04 04:35 PM

Keystyle
 
I'll flip a zone wit ya.. Go to war wit ya
Go on tour wit ya...Hustle over shores wit ya
I'm ya equalizer....Call me the fourth Ace
I'll be ya counselor...advise you through ya court case
I'll never tell a lie...Ignore the reprecussions
Forget the books...Money doesn't need a discussion
If you need me it's nothing...wink if you need me to touch him
Blink.. and he bleeding or something..leaking for thinking he something.
Oracleez..ride with the stream..
you don't wanna collide with the team
Oracle ride with a beam..silence on all of his things...
Just give me a reason to pause..Twenty ain't even a brawl..
Give me a hundred emcee's..versus the one Oracleez.
Beats? I'm breaking 'em down..Streets?..I blaze with the pound
Thunderous.. shaking the ground..Running up.. shaking you down
Built up the stream from the ground...word been getting around
Oracle serve... any with nerve to run with the hound

Born To Kill 01-08-04 04:52 PM

Great flow...

Nice use of vocab...

Not sure if this is about someone here, though...

If it is, I've never heard of em.

Mostly self prop, but you incorporated some nice shit and didn't make it the boring as hell "I'm great" shit I see alot.

Best thing about this was the flow and the multi's.

Very tight.

Peace

Quelude 01-08-04 06:07 PM

Thanx brodie....i appreciate the feed back..Keep it coming ya'll..just some quick shit to get your beak wet...

Dev 01-09-04 05:33 AM

thought the flow was good.... nice n smoothe.... good use of multis....bit vague..... but quite good for a key.....pZ.....

Menik 01-09-04 02:09 PM

Yeah I agree this was alright here......structure was alright for a key i thought....the flow was good in this, it stayed on point, didnt really fall off....you had some nice multies, liked that.....Vocab was alright....but overall this was a alright piece....keep at it.


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