Underground Intelligence
 

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So finally that dictator Saddam has been located then found
like me tha instigator seen to be incarserated underground
intelligence astounds never hear who we are but we are here
never blow up stuck in tha rear for years an then we appear
with no fear ready to save the day with verbal not gun spray
people are blind and say we lead the unsighted of today astray
not me no way i release freedom of speech and for that i've faught
in this war of words cease fires saught but enemies still caught
mental and physical wrot as a prisoner ready to escape the regime
i look my best an stay clean but body is lean coz lack of green
so many fiends injecting to satisfy the craving like a leech
freedom of speech but addiction leaves you nuthin to teach

shaky...
but reasonable key
bars were abit too long in the first part....seemed to try n cram too much vocab in
the content seemed to go off topic from saddam to something else...
alright read..and as akey cant really complain much :)
about time u wrote sumthing u tit

I thought that the bars seemed too long for the rhyme scheme.
You had a decent flow...but the format seemed to make it elongated, if you see what I'm getting at. You had pretty good internal rhyming (the next step would be internal multies, they're super dope) and I appreciated that this wasn't all about saddam, because I was worried after reading the first line.

This was a pretty decent keystyle...with some tuning it could be a decent piece.