Rock1n' Flames VS WORD~P
8 BARS OR 16 LINE MAXIMUM
NO CREW NO HATE NO FRIEND JUST EXPLAINED VOTES YOU SPIT FIRST GOOD LUCK DEADLINE BE TOMORROW. |
word, blind spits by tomorrow midnite
check check check...RULE= NO STRECHTED LINES lol jp do whatever ya do playa |
yeah im still practicing this but i will give a 100 percent pop good luck im checkin in................................................ .................................................. ...............
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Openin' The Package
He's A Vet? Naw Dawg, He Battling Me For That Respect... He Won't Ever See me Like Blind People With Their Specs... Lightin' It UP He Needs To Visit Wackness Emergeny Center For Help From Emerge*... Cuz Word Perfect Flows Slower Than A Broken Suburb And Verse My Is Like Surge**... Writing And Rewriting, His Verse Has No Connecting Punches... The Dude Gettin Sacked Like Brown Paper Bag Lunches... Can't Touch Me Even When You Throwin' Useless Strecthed Lines.. My Verse Leave Ya Paralyzed Like Gettin Hit With A Punch Of Mine.. Here Come The Personals His IP Means He's A 19 yr African Female Havin' 50 Cent Write His Verse***.. After 50 Sees This, He Goin' Runnin' Off To His GhostWritin' Nurse!.. He's In Nuclear Concepts And Yet He Still Don't Understand The Concepts Of Rap... You Should See The Crowd When He Performs, This Nigga Dont Get One Clap... His Profile Says He 24, Need Some Spelling Lessons Cause You Need To Elivate****... Word Perfect Has No Soul Mate Yet, Been Here Since Apr 2003, Still Ain't A Vet Thats Great... Finisher He's Another Chrit! Only Way He Got Those 3 Wins Is If He Bit... Done Rippin This Italy Faggot, Im Juss About To Click Submit... |
I can handle any DIME you spit like STOCK BROCKER-
Take you serious? he already admitted to be a LIGHTWEIGHT JOKER.(avatar) to me battling is a full contact sport- at 5-3 ,,,weather record or height…. your coming up short. Do reverse math… 5+3 equal you getting ate(8)- injest then dijest shitting you out from a tight prostate. Say what you say but im better even in general aspect- with lines as separated as punches thrown dislocated (… nothing connects.) Do this in stretched bars?why? you aint even up to par- spelled ROCKEN FLAMES wrong.. for you “S” comes after an “R”. ………………………….ROCKEN FLAME®S……………………. Your style’s OLD you probably do this for a retirement pention- VOTE ON BATTLES in caps? Your sigs even screamen for attention. By the way HOTTIE and I are together so stop trying so hard- Take the name of your sig before you catch a stalking charge. There’s no challenge you knew this from the beginning- Quote :word, blind spits by tomorrow midnite I guess you couldn’t see yourself winning. |
im sorry if i took a while i forgot this shit pop so i didnt want to know show and hit you with the best i could on last second notice.
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Vote - Word
Punches - Word (by alil) Flow - both Enjoyment - both Structure - word Vocab - word This was a good battle, but in my eyes word took it.. |
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kings overview
flow- word structure- tie personals- tie punches- word multis- ??? vote: WORD~PERFECT could u plz drop an honest vote on these one.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...73&pagenumber=2 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105342 |
Rockin flames - good structure, flow was nice, vocab was good, no multis, wordplay was pretty good, opener was ok, closer was weak, some of the punches hit hard, personals were ok
Word Perfect - structure was ok, flow was a lil hard to catch on to at the beginnin, vocab was good, multis were ok, wordplay was nice, opener was ok, closer was tight, punches hit hard, personals hit hard Conclusion - while rockin flames takes it in structure and flow, word takes it in punches, wordplay and personals. considering punches win battles, ima say word perfect takes this VOTE - WORD PERFECT |
dam this was a tight ass battle break down____
flow:tie wordplay:rf multis:close but wp humor : tie punches: wp best line of battle: wp's closer overall vote: wordperfect drop an honest vote on this shit thnx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105423 |
ayo..........
since i spent the time votin and droppin an opinion can u please do the same?......... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...713#post1071713 much appreciated........ |
rock=shit was wack i think i seen ya do way better son this really had no punches
word=wtf is ur problem are u on crack?? lol u said hottie is wit u lmao but u did come better with the punches and flow and no hottie is not wit chu vote=word |
Yo, WP got this, even if he had some weak punches. RF, dont split your shit up like that ever again, its stupid, and adds to the time it takes to read it. Its no good of the flow is masterful, if O cant read the damn thing.
Vote: WP Hit this up please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105390 |
Rocken Flames.....
Openin' The Package He's A Vet? Naw Dawg, He Battling Me For That Respect... He Won't Ever See me Like Blind People With Their Specs... Not a bad opener ...but played you flipped the concept nicely but meh Lightin' It UP He Needs To Visit Wackness Emergeny Center For Help From Emerge*... Cuz Word Perfect Flows Slower Than A Broken Suburb And Verse My Is Like Surge**... Writing And Rewriting, His Verse Has No Connecting Punches... The Dude Gettin Sacked Like Brown Paper Bag Lunches... Can't Touch Me Even When You Throwin' Useless Strecthed Lines.. My Verse Leave Ya Paralyzed Like Gettin Hit With A Punch Of Mine.. ^^some good creative lines, but not as hard as they could've been Here Come The Personals His IP Means He's A 19 yr African Female Havin' 50 Cent Write His Verse***.. After 50 Sees This, He Goin' Runnin' Off To His GhostWritin' Nurse!.. He's In Nuclear Concepts And Yet He Still Don't Understand The Concepts Of Rap... You Should See The Crowd When He Performs, This Nigga Dont Get One Clap... His Profile Says He 24, Need Some Spelling Lessons Cause You Need To Elivate****... Word Perfect Has No Soul Mate Yet, Been Here Since Apr 2003, Still Ain't A Vet Thats Great... ^^That 50 cent line was gay, but you had some okie personals Finisher He's Another Chrit! Only Way He Got Those 3 Wins Is If He Bit... Done Rippin This Italy Faggot, Im Juss About To Click Submit... ^^Good finisher...best part of your verse... all in all i'd give this 6/10 consistant...but not hard...and good finisher Word Perfect... I can handle any DIME you spit like STOCK BROCKER- Take you serious? he already admitted to be a LIGHTWEIGHT JOKER.(avatar) ^^That line was good flowed nicely soft personal to me battling is a full contact sport- at 5-3 ,,,weather record or height…. your coming up short. ^^First line basic but the end line was good i liked that Do reverse math… 5+3 equal you getting ate(8)- injest then dijest shitting you out from a tight prostate. ^^LOL...that line was helarious good shit there Say what you say but im better even in general aspect- with lines as separated as punches thrown dislocated (… nothing connects.) ^^Good line also...didn't rhyme as good as other lines but made good sence Do this in stretched bars?why? you aint even up to par- spelled ROCKEN FLAMES wrong.. for you “S” comes after an “R”. ………………………….ROCKEN FLAME®S……………………. ^^LOL...that line was dope...good shit man Your style’s OLD you probably do this for a retirement pention- VOTE ON BATTLES in caps? Your sigs even screamen for attention. ^^another good personal By the way HOTTIE and I are together so stop trying so hard- Take the name of your sig before you catch a stalking charge. ^^Good line i liked he flip personal There’s no challenge you knew this from the beginning- Quote :word, blind spits by tomorrow midnite I guess you couldn’t see yourself winning ^^good finisher...i liked the personal in it all in all i'd give this a 7.5/10 wordperfects verse was more consistant with punches that 50 cent line from rf just made his verse fall down....good job though...peace Vote: Wordperfect |
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