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"Street Warz" (New fire from da postman)
Produced by: Vikaden Productions
Written by: Postman Mixing: Postman Performed by: Postman Links Hi Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=835388&q=Hi Lo Fi: http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=835388&q=Lo download: http://www.soundclick.com/util/Down...g.cfm?ID=835388 enjoy www.soundclick.com/hoodrecords |
i like the beat, it took a little bit till it really started but thats alright. lyrics are good nice metas, catchy chorus 2 lol, can u review mine?
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Ok board so
I listen, and u sound really off in the begininng .. U kno what im talking about,"talk shit and youll end up getting ur house hit" it was a rushed bar or u stretched it out .. I dont want to rewind it so ima move on.. and when u said "Play wit my Chedder" u rushed that or said chedder funny .. "Fuck ur name,ur game,ur dame and ur chain" dog extend ur vocab and this IS a topic that has been played since 92 trust me dont be on the next mans dick do some thing original "u better move like a train or leave ur brian on the block" what? dog Dont wast beats wit simple bullshit like that..It sound to me that u like a lotta bullshit emcee's and thats the style u mimick..and whats wacker is talking about busting heat when u never have,will,Or do.. hiphop needs to be expaned not just laced wit the same bullshit topics "Money Cars Bitches and Guns" J.U.I.C.E said it best Gansta's dont rap they husle .. other words dont be a studio gansta cause thats even gayer then Textcees talk shit about audios Now u can take that how u want ..there was No hate involed .. My advice is get off ur gassed up ego and elavate .. we all need to elavate if not then then ur headed no where 100 |
Thanks to EVERYONE for the feedback.
and absymol ill make sure and work on that for my next track. :thumbup: |
flow was dope, hook was nice... nice quality, like the voice.... a lil to G'd up for me though... but its real nice... dope drop...
return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105456 |
abysmal u stupid... stop hatin, shit was on beat total frum what i could tell....
post, hook was siiick... got me "hooked"... ya know... lyrics was ya usual gangsta shit... it suit ya ass tho... str8 track overall... 1 |
upp this bitch
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I`ve checked 4 tracks.Its not really my style but its solid enough.I liked shotgun the best .
later fam peace |
aww,forgot my link
http://www.soundclick.com/chewfuphat |
^i peeped ya and dropped some feedback.. thanks
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nice shit, i ain't really what im into, im more into the other forms of story tellin like nas!!!
the guy singin at the end was ill, an i was feelin the beat!!! |
^thanks.. i think you listened to the wrong song.... but its al good.
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top soil
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Listenin'...
... Intro Is Low As Fuck... Quality Is Good... ... Hook Is Coo'... Vocals Are A Lil' Low... ... Flow Is Iight, Could Be Better... Some Words Are Forced... ... Lyrics Are Iight... Mic And Voice Presence Is On Point... ... How Old Are You??? You Sound A Lil' Young... ... Like 13 Or 14... Keep It Up, Boy Boy... ... Stay Up And Strong... - Jay-O |
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