Love Scar
 

Umm anyone who has been followin my poetry i apologize to constantly brood over this woman i called wife but using it to vent, my pure form will return soon....


Woman....give me a moment to say that again...woman.....

my whimsical ode to a lady close to my heart, class matched only by her ass~
in the past i've dedicated my heart to others but my ways changed fast~
I loved you with my heart among other things put me in a frenzy~
walk with you holdin your back pocket and niggas sprout wit envy~
trapped in your enchanting eyes, an impeccable countenance has me locked~
but u didnt remain true tryna get through every dick on the block~
we exchanged i love you before but u turned me into a man lost~
soul bruised and abused i wanna see u wit your hands crossed~
i shouldnt say that but u cut me deeper than words can say~
cheated my queen and now i wanna make birds my prey~
i pray you'll return, so i wait like maidens whose men are at sea~
over the raging waters on a stormy cliff i want u to come to me~
but the torrential tears cascading down my cheeks pain they send~
You keep locked in your body a piece of my heart i'll never see again~

1luv.

This was deep n i loved it. I can say i relate cause i felt like this b4 wit my b/f. There was madd emotion flowing thro this and great imagery. In a way...I'm speechless. Great job. Keep it up

your words have substance in this poem and what you said in it has good flow. from the first line to the last of the poem I saw that you consistently kept this flow and depth. Its unfortunate tho u gotta deal with women like that. i enjoyed.

this piece wuz pretty deep i think
but..
a word of advice
while writing a love poem avoid usin words such as "ass,niggas,dick,etc"

^lol thank you for the feedback, keep em coming 1luv.