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Nevermind....im gonna lengthen it, then ill redrop it....

i liked it alot. a bit short but the lyrics, structure and flow was all dope.

I liked it make it longer and it's banging man yo structure and flow was on key just make it al little it longer............................................ .................................................. ..............

This one was hot man, everything was on top, I liked the flow and your use of vocab. You're definatly spittin this on on the real. Keep writtin, definatly lookin to see more like this.

I'll Conceal Drips...Cuz Like OverUsed Wells My Tear Ducts Ran Dry
A Man's Cry Falls On Deaf Ears...So Whats Tha Point Of Having Tears On Stand By?
I Can't Die......
Show Me Hate Or Love...I Embrace You Fake Thugs With 8 Slugs



section was dope...didnt really need wordplay or punches...illness...

Multi's were ill .. flow was on point throughout..only lost flow in 1 place...niceness..

some thug lines mixed with deeper 1's interesting..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105566

Thanx uppin.........

Please can i get some feedback... I wanna know if im ill enough for a vet crew......

this shit is bitten..you know it!