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Petrafy vs -Technician-
me n u
10 lines yall kno tha rules ill go first must drop within 20 minutes after i drop |
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drop mafucka..............taken madd long.....................
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Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin//
Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid// Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm// Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes// Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick// The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick// The only way we can have a real battle fight// Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE// Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear// The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear// |
sorry man....now we wait for urs............................................... ......
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nice verse.....keyed this....
After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with? Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^ Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy |
well a poor battle.......
petrafy took the vocab but he lacked any sorta creativity...very generic......technician didnt say much either....i'd say the punches were tie'd at bad....technician did have better flow.....petrafy's was very choppy and basic.....thats what pulls this one for tech..... along wit personals on his vocab......lol vote- tech |
So I can Snort-the-ashes
taken from eminem you looter. i reckon he should be dq'ed. either way, my vote goes to tech need these closed peeps. drop a link and i will return the vote, like here... nook vs magnificent nook vs profit nook vs castrol hanky... |
yea......very quick key.....notice the line about it being a game 2 me! :thumbup:
upppn.........1.................... ......................nice battle Petrafy............................... |
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damn......uppin for some votes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin//
Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid// Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm// Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes// Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick// The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick// The only way we can have a real battle fight// Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE// Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear// The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear// __________________________________ aight first off dont ever put // at the end...................... overall..................................7/10...................................... aight......................ok punches..............ok wordplay............. but this verse does lack..................................Catagories.. ....... aight......................well..................j ust elavate...................... ___________________________________ After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with? Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^ Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy ______________________________________ aight...................overall 8/10.....................good stuff.............. better punches..................better personals.................. just a better verse overall............aight.......................... .... vote/tech.............................................. ...... peace............................................. ....................... |
[Petrafy's verse]
Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin// Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid// Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm// Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes// Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick// The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick// The only way we can have a real battle fight// Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE// Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear// The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear//[/Petrafy's verse] It was a lil played Punches were weak Flow was ok...... Tried usin to big of words Wordplay was weak Personals were lacked Overall........7/20 [tech's verse] After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with? Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^ Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy[/tech's verse] Straight Punches were ok Flow was decent in places Personals were lacked Wordplay was ok... Finisher sucked.....didn't flow Overall..........11/20 Vote-Technician |
Yo im gonna rip this bitch he aint gonna-be-lastin//
Ill blind you spittin a stream of Hydrochloric-acid// Till you stiffen up n fall on the floor-n-spasm// Disintegrate you, So I can Snort-the-ashes// Always have cum your mouth cuz thas the reason you spit sick// The only time you beatin me is wit both your hands on my dick// The only way we can have a real battle fight// Is if you read other peoples lyrics and BITE// Im like Bin-Laden and you are USA i keep you in fear// The only way to make it alive is to dissapear from this stratosphear// this was horrid it used played lines weak lines .....stretches lines ...fine lines....nough siad i give it a 5/20............ After all the time I been waitin thats all you came up with? Your structure is horrible and ur punches straight suck bitch I could beat that verse by lettin' my little brother rip you Took you hours to write garbage, thats another issue There a few things you need to work on before battlin Tech But in the saddle you stepped, no choice but to rattle ya neck Anybody can rhyme a bunch'a big words wit simple metaphors Your only hurtin ya self like U were Big Bird punchin metal doors When I step in this thread it's really just a game to me see?^ Cause voters are laughin asses off, and not becuz of Petrafy ok could tell he really didn't try on this one but whatever he still took it i give that key a 12/20 not bad for a key...........vote tech......peeps these thanx... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105960 ^elevated.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105864 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105893 ^FL...........................thanx good battle... |
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