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~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 04:10 PM

Yo What Up vs. GESToner1er
 
aight son........

10 lines

house rules

verses due tonight at 12 est.........

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 04:13 PM

CHECKIN IN...........

i got a lil writers block goin currently so ill drop later..........

waitin on ur check in though...........

GESToner1er 01-10-04 04:14 PM

check check check.yo bitch imma spit rite now.......i aint gonna be home tonight,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

GESToner1er 01-10-04 04:40 PM

Yo wat up dis shit shuld be fun,if i wasnt horny and drunk nigga u wouldn't exist my son,turn off ur mic and go back 2 skool ur careers ova its done...yous a fuckin bitch ill take out my cock and dick smack u make u think my shyt weigh a ton..

Dis bitch is a fuckin phony just look at is profile he addmits he a fakeassgangsta...couldnt think of otha words 2 describe urself???I got one u a pussy ass wanksta...

Nigga if u didnt wanna battle u shoulda just run,hop da train, take the bus,fuck da plane...but instead u accepted sum1 call da fuckin institute this bitch is insane...got dis fag so shook nigga lost his brain...but its all good cuz i got dis niggas mom on my dik thinkin it a candycane...

i wouldnt be ur pops if ur mom hadnt walked around ass if her twat was free...im ur father nigga why cant accept it and see...im done with dis battle so ~wat up now fuckin pussy~

wun bitch

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 05:27 PM

ha ha aight..........i guess ill drop now.........check it out..........

if u observe-my-punches, u realize im ill and keep winnin battles, and im just like a school food person, always "servin-some-lunches"/
u deserve-my-touch, cause when u called me out, u knew what was comin and already decided to "reserve-the-crutchs"/

in bitch slapped, u claimed ud win cause u live-in-the-east, but u obviously hadnt seen me serve kids, cause ur the fourth cat that im "givin-a-feast"/
i outlive-the-deceased, i never die, and u blame bein touched the reason for ur wack skills, but dawg, seriously "forgive-the-priest"/

i arrest-queers, that means u now gotta record, but u gonna be leavin this site after this battle anyway cause u just a "guest-on-here/
i suggest-u-disappear, cause ur just wack as hell, i could continually serve ya, but ull never be able to "digest"-ur-fear/

this guys age is unkown just like his occupation, its quite sad when cats is waitin for the day u stop to start throwin a celebration/
u dont got any admiration, and wit ur combination of words ur family is beggin u to quit so ur wack punches wont get passed down to the next generation/

i make ya not-calm, cause ur next on my list, im takin ova ya family and i already got-ya-mom/
when i spit i drop-bombs, this cat got his only skills for christmas, a website called rappingfordummies dot-com/

EXPLANATIONS-

1st bar - lunch ladys serve lunches

2nd bar - in my callout thread for another guy he jumped in and said somethin like, "i dont gotta worry bout this cause im from the east"

3rd bar - his names gestonrier, i just switched it up to be guest on here

4th bar - in his profile his age and occupation arent listed

5th bar - self explanatory

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LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!

TheProphet777 01-10-04 05:44 PM

Hard battle to decide heres the breakdown

Flow:both...Very long strucutres...So i have to give it to both So they wont hate
Structure:neither
Punches+personals:yo whats up....had this he had more punches and personals...All were seen IN HIS Huge as structure
multis:neither
Overall:yo had this...Thats about it

generic disease 01-10-04 05:58 PM

flow:neither cause you strected your bars
punches:yo wut up
personals:yo wut up
thats pretty much all there was not such a good battle ...

vote=yo wut up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...000#post1074000
vote on this battle please

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 06:00 PM

^^^thanx for the votes.........but prophet, i did have multis holmes.........thanx though.........

UPPIN #1 !!!!!!!!!!!!

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 06:25 PM

UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!

CMON NOW FOOS, LETS GET SOME VOTES ALL UP IN HERRRRRE!!!!!!!!!!

peace.............

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 08:48 PM

UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!

CMON QUIT SLEEPIN ON DIS.........

I VOTE ON TONS OF BATTLES, SO CMON YALL..........

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 10:09 PM

UPPIN # 4!!!!!!!!!!!!

CMON NOW............JUST DROP YO DAMN OPINION...........

peace...............

Wits Mind 01-10-04 10:16 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105697

i thouhg wut up took this battle
he had better flow
an better structure
kids not half bad
im in a hurry so dont mind thee typos

Vo-te-YO qutup


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105697

^^holla at this i need ya honest oPINON..PLz..PC SHIT SIK

-Zone Out- 01-10-04 10:21 PM

yo what up got this battle with better punches..better structure..although he had some l o n g a s s l i n e s..it was enough to get him the win..gest..or whatever needs to elevate..work on structure..punches..you had a personal..but it was weak..yo what up..have some mediocre punches..

my vote~yo what up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...978#post1074978

~Yo What Up~ 01-10-04 11:29 PM

UPPIN # 5!!!!!!!!!!

LAST ONE..........

YO GEST U KNOW U CAN UP DIS TOO.......CMON NOW..........

LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH............

Brethren 01-11-04 12:03 AM

I vote - Yo What Up

Punches: Yo
Multis: Yo
Wordplay: Yo
Personals: Yo

This is a one-sided battle, but Yo, you need a little more creativity, some of those punches are played.

i arrest-queers, that means u now gotta record, but u gonna be leavin this site after this battle anyway cause u just a "guest-on-here/
i suggest-u-disappear, cause ur just wack as hell, i could continually serve ya, but ull never be able to "digest"-ur-fear/
Best Bar of the battle.


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