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Yo What Up vs. lil john
aight son......
10 lines house rules verses due tonight at 12 est........ |
CHECKIN IN............
ill start keyin my shit later tonight........... waitin on ur check in though........... |
CHECKIN IN. ill spit first
This will be your last gasp of air, so use it wisely cos u aint got time to spare my rhymes are like religious scripts, people read dem for spitting tips, Ill burn you with my best resources, ill dive into my raping sources, ur a criminal producing petty crimes, every MC knows u nick my lines ull try and attack me with all ur might, but my rhymes are simply dynamite, ur as tight as a prostitutes minge at the end of a night ur down ur out ur on da streets, iv shown no mercy, just like my peeps |
blah............once again, no need to come my hardest.........aight.........check it out..........yo, yo........
see i already merked one cat today, now next is lil-john, but what sux for u is i never left the fightin mind, and my guns r still-drawn/ its no question ya skills-gone, i dont know if u ever had any talent, but i really dont care, i just continue to kill-on/ cause i come through wit loaded artillery always loaded-to-shoot, but i just left my ammo at home today, cause i took bombs and there an explosion-an-route/ enough starin-time-ta-shoot, and u claim u reppin the streets, but when its time to battle ur already wearin-a-suit/ u got 10 posts and prolly learned to rap 10 minutes-ago, ur gay and wack, a disgrace and ull never be able to split-this-show/ just quit-u-ho, no one wants to read that shit, ur rhymes make people sick, but cats still huddle round there comps waitin for me to me spit-though/ when people hear ya remains, in the mail all u get is a blank-check, do us all a favor and quit rappin ur just makin-a-wreck/ u must mistake-the-trek, cause ur gay as fuck, and my punches rap round yo face, and show no regret as i break-ya-neck/ the only time this guy thinks he wins is when he beats-the-meat, this guy stands on what he thinks is skills, but when i pull the "sheet" ima laugh when his face hits the concrete/ u were wrong to speak, when u spit u most remind me of shoes.....always wearin "da feet" (defeat)/ ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- blah, whateva............no need to come hard........... 7 min keystyle............ |
UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!
LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN DIS PEICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND LIL JOHN U CAN UP TO HOMBRE!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
if i culd....vote 2 yo wat up......
structure: yo....even tho it waz out-strethed a lott punhces: yo...didnt need 2 com out hard.....john barely had any flow: yo.....eazy 2 follow opener: once again yo clozer:jon.,...yoz waz kinda corny vote:...if i culd.....yo....n jon needz 2 elevate |
without a doubt What Up got this shit. His structure was a little long, but his punches were good, and he was rhyming inside of his rhymes. Lil John's lines were sorta played but he had some pretty nice multis, but the rest of ya rap could use some work dawg. My Vote goes to YO WHAT UP.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105535 |
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^^^thanx for the votes...........
UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN HERRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
punches yo
structure yo opener yo closer both sucked vote yo....................................... |
This Was A 1 Sided Battle But N E Way Yo What Up Took It Easily With The Punches,Vocab,Personals,Disses,Creativity, Etc....
Vote=Yo What Up Can You Vote On This??.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105778 |
^^^aight thanx for the votes.............
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES ALL UP IN DIS PEICE!!!!!!!!!!!! |
yo what up merked this kid
yo- punches-9/10 strucute-7/10 personals-8/10 metas-6/10 FLOW-6.5/10 overall-yo one this shit lil jon u really need to elevate Lil Jon--Spit in the link in my sig Yo-Return Favor In sig overall-yo what up Pz...1 |
^^^thanx for the vote...............
UPPIN # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES HOMBRES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
UPPIN # 5 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CMON NOW........DONT SLEEP ON DIS..........LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH !!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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