The Arrival
 

Aight yo, well this is my first post here, I wrote this at work while I was on break in about 10 mins. I hope to post more rhymes I make in the future and if any Crews need someone, holla at me. Peace

My lyrical weapon of choice // is my voice // i use it to boist
about my new style of speech // aimed at the world // trying to teach
gettin my message across // killin these MC's // crucifying em' on a cross
no ressurection occuring // you're in the wrong direction // start turning
my flow equipted with venom // sinking through your pours // peircing the denim
i send chills down your spine // with each verse of this rhyme
shout out for a hersche // this is the scene of a murder crime
im like a bomb ticking // ready to set off at any time
my words are stimulatin' // have bitches anticipatin'
the arrival of your rival's survival // hold you bible
and start to pray // beg God not to get slayed // by this blade's spade
portrayed by those who are afriad // patch yourself up with a band-aid
and try again
or end your prayer now // say Amen

Any feedback will be appriciated

nice. thats all i can say imma put in a good word for u at dynasty soldiers

that was good but yo homes try to work on yo structure and then this would be fuckin ausome ........... keep at it ............. fo real

thanks guys, yea its a lil sloppy but i flowed it nice in my head, i was trying to put it to flow with a beat and i have a few that would work nice but im busy doing some homework n shit so ill touch it up later / make a new flow at a later time, jus laying down some rhymes to see what you guys think of it, keep the comments coming yo, peace

uppin'
any other feedback before i let this one die?