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Vendetta Vs. casualty
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10 lines spit do in 30 minutes no d.c.h votes u spit first u set up no bullshit no alias no swaying no feeding no biting |
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My ill verbs and nouns that cut your vertebre in half like im using scissors// Im BIG like espn magazine pictures// I am cutting ya up so I can hand you your spleen, and bounce round your intestines like a tramp-O-line// You hafta get your own girl hiv testing every week to make sure that “tramp-is-clean”// Lemme introduce you tro my guilletene my skill’s obscene, I got more flavors then jelly beans// I’m tryin to watch Freestyle Friday,and u jus tryin to think of “106” ways to get in “Nelly’s Jeans”// I'm viscous in every matter when my ryme's told// You thought blind posting was typin wit a blind fold// I'm high strung like i posess five lungs// I have a poetically "alive tongue," and will get you "higher to heaven" more then a combination of "Mase" and a dozen "high monks"// |
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sorry my comp is fucked.. im going to buy a new modem so i cant spit in 30 mins.. ill spit by 12 noon tomorrow eastern time
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this kid is infested with wackness gotta spray him with lysol/........
well see how it goes before this room becomes frightful/........... i cant understand you your wack im ill like an infected skully........ cause me and you are very the oppisite from a hyperbole.........(comparison) this is over before it started just give me a fair-ness-win........ this kid holds more things in his hands than mr garrison........ kid got has a crew full of dickriders and 50 cent biters............... this battle is more one sided than a pitcher with only a slider...... youll causaily miss this win with my last line ill finish him.......... like an unneded builing im just totaly diminished him........... back and spittin.. uppin (1)............. |
casualty you need to work on the following:
-structure -punches -multis -personals vendetta, you had a good verse...you could improve your punches and elevate em a lil bit...but you at least had the things that casualty didnt.. u were direct...nice verse vote-vendetta |
fuck you prophacy if you gave me as much time as he Had I could have a tight verse too
BUt it took him 2 hours fo that shit and why start a battle if had had to leave anyway expescially when it was a timed spit have you thought about that you stupid mother fucker |
This Was A Decent Battle Both Came Nice But Ima Have To Go With Casualty He Had Some Nice Punches,Wordplay And Decent Multi Attempt And His Disses/Personals Were More On Point Good Battle Tho...
Vote=Casualty Return The Favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...hreadid=105371] |
This Was A Sik Battle Liked Both ya SPits but Casuality He Had Some Nice Punches,Wordplay And Decent Multi Attempt And His Disses/Personals Were More On Point Good Battle Tho...
Vendetta U didnt Come Half As Bad as i thought good SHit Keep it Up Vote=Casualty Return the Favor SHits ILL....PLz peep Ben slepted on shits Hot!! http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105750 |
thanx fo the honest votes lets get some more in here
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105754
hit that up dawg i droped a vote u do the same u want more votes hit more battles up aite.. hit mine for starters..pc |
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i think vedetta got dis 4 da followin
punches flow opener..SICKKKKKKKKK closer: it waz ite.... ___________ humour: tie vote: vendetta....if i culd....yo plze hit dis battle up.....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105843 |
Yep... this was murking at its best... very one sided... good structure, had complexity, some creativeaty... some punches.,,, Cas... your structure is really fucked... you gotta EVEN out yo lines like sone above me did... its not that hard... just gotta fix that ish... and multis... you had them... don't let dunny say ish... he had'em,... but everything else just fix ya ish dunny... ok battle
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