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Some fucking crazy ass shit !~~~!~~~!!~~~
Growin' up in the hood, surrounded by "crack fiend's"//
fake friends and drug addicts, bowls with "packed greens"// lookin up above puzzled, cold streets got me to "act mean"// with hate for the planet, hate for life and "hatin' my self"// Slangin' for minimum wealth, "under estimatin' my health"// lookin' in the mirror lost, i dunno "who i am"// livin' life in slow mo, if i had a chance ill "go if i can"// wit rox and "blow in my hand" "growin slow as a man"// rappin's a future i can make it i just "kno that can"// homies askin (R u ready?) but i tell em "i dunno if i am// ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"// always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"// SMile now cry Later, im a diamond in da dirt above all, im 'greater'// cause i don't trust shit but my gun and the bullets in da 'chamber'// everynight i speak to the "savior", but he dont anwser my "prayers"// so my hip stay strapped wit guns, and my hands on the "Razors"// this "survival is nature" rollin blunts usin' "bible as papers"// and it seems that the "Struggles raises" and we just known as "trouble makers"// they don't see this is what they made us, im jus 1 of the million s of the "cycle's faces!"// |
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nice man, good flow n i especially liked this part
ima nervous break down only "god knows that i am"// always ready, with both hands on the 9 like a "Quarter to Ten"// |
need feedback thanx homie
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yo still wouldnt mind some feedback on this motha fucka
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This was alright i thought.....your structure was ok....just watch some of the lines length they were kinda stretched out on some of the lines though.....flow was alright in this.....you had some nice multies...overall a alright piece...keep at it.
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