My shorty
 

lol- really dont know how this got to me but my mami chula out of state right now peep it

Ay mami
come and get some of this luuuv potion
i'll give you devotion and be the motion in your ocean...
let me slide like lotion, get you open wit this strokin,
pokin, pokin, pokin until i get u swolen
wishin, dreamin, whooooooa!!, oh hopin
this poems a token, i cherish every word you've spoken.....
you're my princess, im just a frog croakin.....
a kiss from your sexy lips and the spell will be broken.
girl,
you got the best of me, invest in me im your destiny,
dis loco mixed wit u a beautiful recipe
i dream of you caressin me heavenly you're my extacy,
expecially when you're cursin at me i think of you sexin me....
i want you next to me this separation gets to me....
Secretly whispering kissing and glistening.........
Sweat dripping while listening picturing............
You and I behind closed doors.........
Passionate absolutely not practicing abstenence...
...rough as a cactus and loving afterwards....
Since you hold the key to invincible master locks.....
Lock the door behind you
Release relax because deep within the jaws Of love....
...we intertwine....like vines.......
trying to find our sublime climax.....
As I bend your spine back.................
It's kind of hard to find that behind closed doors

haha u noee
latez

Nice poem. Good imagery and scheme was basic but good. Nice to dedicate a poem to ya mami. Kinda sweet. Overall I liked dis. Good job. Keep it up.

Nice in what aspects? lol Naw'll it was aiight though more of a page from a book of poems devoted to porn rather than love lol

good point of view^^

lyrical_killer keep doing your thing. As long as it has heart in it, I've enjoyed. You incorporate your love with humor, hey don't hold back have a good time with your words. We definately need some laughter in here. Keep writin.