Life Conquest (deep/thought process)
 

I’m on a life conquest//
Trying to do my best, to overcome the stress//
Musically I have been blessed//
Lacking encouragement from everyone I know//
Gaining the strength to succeed and over-through//
Anyone who decides to walk in front of my path//
Never looking back, subtracting the doubtful like math//
I’m ready to engage in kombat, let them witness my wrath//
Expressing self through lyrics in every track//
As I lay them out, right before their eyes//
It’s the cowards like that, in whome I despise//
See the world through my eyes//
And you’ll never want to see again//
You’ll want to be blind, cause my life you can’t comprehend//
Don’t try to defend//
Cause your not perfect, as you claim to be//
This I gurentee//
Speaking now, or forever hold your peace//
In the end, we’re all deceased//
Praying to god, to hear my cries//
Constant sleepless nights, he never seems to reply//
A tears drips from my eyes//
Thinking about lost loved ones, as I long for him to hear me//
So much shit on my mind, that I can’t think clearly//
Hoping that he will guide me and get me through//
Trials and tribulations of a different brew//
The situations and circumstance from which I am loosing grip//
I observe myself as I begin to slip//
Over the edge of the cliff//

Now I may not flow like you guys on here but here's some deep thought....to process...

work on your structure and youll elevate alot.
and it was flowing well at the begging but it faded a bit at the end, appart from that it was good.

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didnt like the scheme ya used,,, too basic.... and the flow was off.... carry the rhymes further... and work on complexity.... pZ

i agree with them ^^^ the concept was tight, and i like what u had goin, but work on the flow and u got a tight verse, nothin to worry bout just keep elevatin.... other than that nice drop man