It's All Real
first is me.. then formula.
beat-its all real (pitch black) it's all real, all hail the storm of a man that soothes, thunders through hell ravin`, shakin`, makin` satan shake in his boots, the running new dude the ripping new jack, the nice always in the cut sage that never knew that, when he got paged from the front office the song off-his album made the front page of that new mag.. but he's not bad although its tough in rap for someone to be new and be news to someone else that shares the same views.. the freak, beat rockin by the unique rap prophet, so you - can hip hop off it, and i.. can make some hip hop and make.. a profit off it Eyes On The Prize. . Like Requiem For A Dream Die From Lies. . Spleen Slipped Via Bullet Smothered In Vaseline Harass Ya Needs, Ya Central Nervous System Stutterin' Park-A, You Below Me In Park-B N Butterin' It's Nuttin' Son, I'll Bust My Gun Quicker Than A Rising Sun Since I'm The Livest One, You're Dying By The Tongue Fucking Frantic Facists Frontin' In Newspapers Ducking Damage Damn Us Dipshits You Know We Movemakers Bootleggers Boggle Bravo Bastards Killing This Industry Cater Caidence Corrupted Cavemen Didn't Have Technology Rappers Rippin Rockin Racked Yo. . They Fucking Dying Shameless Shadefest Seemingly Nothing, No Something Trying Denying That Me N Kredit Dope, Suggest You Switch Ya Smoke Before I Flip N Choke You Like Spree Handlin His Coach D Double T, Raps Medallion. . Keeping Shit Afloat |
Up For Feedback. . Kredit says his shit normal on the beat. . I spit mine rather fast. . it flows. . trust this.
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Yo...this was a nice drop....Formula's verse was better tho...Aye Bee, ya jus' neet to work on word choice and bar length....oh, and rhyme scheme...you rhyme you spit 2 or 3 lines and then ryhme again...not a bad scheme, but you have to try soemthin else to make it work...no hate....Formula had a nice structure...nice rhymes too. Good drop...
7/10 Hit up Rebel.....Citizen...my Open Mic...thx... |
lmfao, newbies
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True ^ ^
Structure is dope for you Aye. . And flows well, I just have the longer bars, shit still flows. -brushes my and aye's shoulders off- |
roflmao @ the eminem pic in his sig.
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