Cause and Effect
 

replied to many pieces.


In this society today there's much that's a mess
`Cuz the bullshit we call hate is the main cause for effect
Pressed on allegations due to common segretation -
known as hatred, has forced many impatient - it`s blatant
that a single statment can spark the bluntest of matches
and we could sit here and not notice until our world collapses.
It happens - and often, poverty is a causing -
for the rawkus and roaring
which`s really a call, that you`ve been ignoring .
and the worst is yet to come - but worse have we come to yet?
truth is met -
`cuz remember you hated most when hate was least to expect
and a time of harmony is beyond belief, and honestly-
how we can continue to live in an enviorment polluted horribley
by hatred and blaming of wrong doings with out comparing twice
seeing as the most primative places
have the deepest stereotypes.
So when you awake when morning, and this effect is true
Don`t question how and why, the cause was you.

Rhyme scheme was dope. Message was there. Ending made it come together nicely. Overall this was pretty nice man. I enjoyed the read. :)

the flow seemed natural and connected
throughout. . . is a Good all round piece
. . the ending made it all come together
and I liked message you gave off. . nice
drop dude

Good Message
Flow was a lil off in places
But it was a dope peice
Keep it up.. You'll only get better

word - up.