ZACH.....please feedback
 

School is easy and I'm thriving in class
Besides this small and freckled boy who sits behind me in Class
He's normal and quiet, I talked to him, but there was no name he would mention
I saw him once at a day in-detention and didnt pay him attention
His eyes with bruises and black, he's the new kid named zack
but zack new he was that, another outcast in black
His father told me "one morning he was quiet like he was plotten a threat"
After he got dressed and ate breakfast...
he hugged his mother, then shot his mom in the head
She cried and bled but he laughed .... and thought it was kool
And he put two revolvers in his backpack as he jogged off to school
Maybe we're ignorant, Shouldnt have this dawned at us
And its funny that day, he waved as i drove by on the bus
His freckles were red, boilin hot but he seem to care about none of the features
And after the first bell rang, he came, last in the door and gave one to the teacher ....
And you could hear the alarms saying "code Red" or sumtin on speakers
And as he felt power, i saw in his eyes, you would know hows he's weak
He started yellin and screaming and then a tear slowly rolled down his cheek|
Then runnin into the hallway shooting at will
For a second Zack look at me and realized,
he just knew that he killed
With one more bullet in the last gun he musta knew it was out
And he cried, stuffed the gun to his lips then blew his tongue threw his mouth
Fell to the floor and i ran and I held up his-head
Just a souless corpse and I could tell he was dead
and at 9:11 when the bell shoulda rung
We gathered around and wondered sumtin we coulda-done
His father ashamed, terrified all alone bothered and pained
He commited suicide to be with his wife, hopin never to be bothered again
The childrens families cried and remorsed for the children they lost
and this did happen it's just much realer then thought
Then I woke up at 7:30 ate breakfast and get the beds-made
then I realized it was a dream and I talked to him the next day
cuz the next could be last, we never know when the next ends
and on this rhyme it will read .........
Andy & Zack Best Friends!…………..