IceMan187 vs. FreeZa (ROUND 2)
 

10-20 LINES
NO D/R VOTES
NO CREW
NO Hate
post 3 hour after check in

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Yo I sling rock cuase my thang cocked a rap around ya throut like a sling shot/I`m what you not/ and thats a fagget if you ant suckin dick you proably wish dat you had it/Cuase I`m cold like da middle of december my guns is something for you to remember let dem shots ring out and when you fall scream timber.

yo this mutherfucker wanna go again/
i been lyrically slayin wit a pen, since age 10/

my rhymes crawl inside ya head and break out through ya skin/
im lyrically eatin you alive inside, till ya brains fry and ya eyes spin/

your lyric skill is trash, it makes me sick/
like when i see dudes dressed as chics, wit lipstick/

closer:
your flow is gone, like Mc Hammers money/
your skill is so trash it aint even funny/
dogg you sweeter than honey/
so drop that dick cus you been eatin em like carrots to bugs bunny/


vote !

uppin 1................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................................

wtf.....iceman took dis again....yo freeza....wa waz dat????
dat waz no verse....
punches: iceman....dam
flow: icmean
structire: ICEMAN...yo freeza ...ur shyt waz like a paragraph dawg.....werk on it
humour: iceman
vote: iceman
plzee hit up dis battle.......thnx dawg

Aight noob battle...

punches goes to Uce his hit freeze pretty good
..flow goes to Ice too.. freeze you need to work on ya structure
...both could elevate..

but this has to go to

Iceman

Poll vote kid
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...54&pagenumber=2

uppin 2................................................. .................................................. .................

damn iceman took this battle freeza just fuckin killed himself with this line

he called himself gay.. lol

"I`m what you not/ and thats a fagget "

lol.. iceman had better wordplay.. plus freeza had some stretched ass lines.. disses and punchlines would have to go to iceman

IceMan Took This Easily In Every Aspekt Punches,Personals,Multies,Disses,Worplay,Flow Etc..................

Vote=Iceman

uppin 3................................................. .................................................. ...............................................

yo ice man took this if i could vote now i would like to battle someone like him but the other boy was wack

ice man took this easily...no need for break down

he had harder punches, better flow, more complex harder hitting verse

frezza work on ya struct...fix ya lines so that they are all the same length and cut ya lines in half...dont write it like a paragraph either

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anyways vote - ice man

uppin 4...... i only need 1 more vote come on peeps............................................. .................................................. ..............................................

FINAL UPPIN............................................. .................................................
i only need one more vote, and also can you peeps hit up the lil tagger vs iceman link in my sig and poll vote too

THANX!