when the boredom kicks in!!!
 

[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106211lyrics g, warm up

[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106224liba dee, multi madness

[url=http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=106183west, fears




i watch through my cig smoke, using my eyes,
contemplating susicide, pondering my demise,
but from beyond what lies, death in the skies,
i've had too many tries, at a bleek, failing life,
if offered one more reprise..............
.....would i take it, or again shun evil's diguise,
false hope cries, thinking back about the lies,
i seem to realize, things that shock an surprise,
asking my self.. no replies, my mind denies,
cant do nothin as my pity multiplies......
as i near the end, my cigerette, smoke dies,


nice short, and easy to reply to, so reply!!!

thought it was quit basic sounding, jus with the way you rhymed it.... but the content was good ...l liked that.... seems like your one depresed kid...lol.....pZ....

lol, i will be if no 1 replys to my open mic!!!!

uppin!!

uppin for some feedback??????????????????????

damn y'all is sleepin!!!

any feedback at all..............................

and again............................

i should of called it look at me 20 odd times an sleep on me!!!!

for fucks sake......... drop a link an i will reply to urs

should of called it look at me 20 odd times an sleep on me!!!!
Could've been re-worded better..but strong message..ok vocab..

i watch through my cig smoke, using my eyes,
contemplating susicide, pondering my demise,
but from beyond what lies, death in the skies,
i've had too many tries, at a bleek, failing life,
if offered one more reprise..............
.....would i take it, or again shun evil's diguise,
false hope cries, thinking back about the lies,
i seem to realize, things that shock an surprise,
asking my self.. no replies, my mind denies,
cant do nothin as my pity multiplies......
as i near the end, my cigerette, smoke dies,

Dont do it! lol..pretty good..nice sharp..clear message,
Nice vocabulairy nice little read.. try to expand &..
advance your pieces though..but this was ok.