Tymez In Mind
 

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TYMEZ IN MIND

Chorus:
livin through da lifez so many find
that da hopless mindz we spare bare no pride
sanctified by my liez, rectified my rise
keep my back 2 da wind an da tymez in mind

verse 1:
itz rough sometimez, so many murderz -n- various crimes
signed off as nothin more than a thorn in so many sidez
can we shine through da darkness, heartless and departed
lost hope in our fatherz regaurdless we roll in dis uncharted
world as morderz, marked off as dead from da fuckin womb
jaded for multiple ages, ultimatly hated 4rm da cradle 2 da tomb
but keep ya head up, i know ur fed up but therez another day
wake 2 a betta chance 2 advance out of this hell, so dont stray
from da road dat u chose, hold on and dont fold 2 dese demonz
keep dreamin, they never wanted u 2 breath in da air of freedom
stay wit hope an faith even though u dont have a dime
in pocket, no one can stop us if ya keep da tymez in mind

chorus x2

Verse 2:
To all my niggaz in da pen willin death, doin 25 2 Lyfe
i know itz lonely in ya cell, got no homies black or white
ready 2 die cause it could b ur day, playin wit da big boiz
fought ur way through the flames but the pain was a decoy
hoisted above, no luv from cowardz all doin a lyfe sentence
an no trustin dese felonz, thought ur freindz were depentent
but in da end de were all snitchez, bitchez left ya in stitchez
out on bail lookin 4 a livin only 2 find urself in public lynchinz
no place 2 find peace, cause da idea itself has been decieced
many have shed tearz as de watched family pass in da street
lookin 4 da space 2 breath, itz a crooked world stay tryin
stay defient 2 da violence and keep da tymes in ya mindz

chorus 2x

Verse 3:
dis ones a shout out 2 all da single workin mommas
2 all da devoted men raisin de kidz right as fathers
in da projectz itz rough around da edgez but amazin
kidz r first an poverty stricken women bond 2 raise em
chase'in our painz wit 40 ounces, some say were cursed
facin termination in da worst, lookin up 2 God 4rm a hurst
iz it da way dat we live or does God just fuckin hate us
why should we be forgived, this iz da way he made us
born sinnerz tryin 2 live up 2 da title of a god damn saint
at da rate now therez no time left for us to clean our slate
did da dirt -n- now itz time 2 pay, a price 4 my many crimez
da pain an sufferin in my eyez iz reflected through da tymez

chorus 3x

dont take me off im gettin 3 linkz

homie u dont need 3 links ne moreson...u only allowed to post 1 topic up tho, but newayz bout ur drop...that was sum pretty ill shit 4 a newbie...shit ive been in here 4 awhile but istill can drop sumtin as good as that, newayz ur structure was good, vocab was fire n so was wordplay son, i like this drop a lot..keep doin ur thang son

Peace

oh n if u got time can u peep my lil freestyle n give me sumfeedback

This was alright i thought...you improved a lot since your last piece i read i think, good job....structure in this was good.....your flow in this was good through out i thought, it stayed on point through the whole thing....probably could have used a little better multies...but overall it was alright...keep at it.