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-Technician- vs Thutch12
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[b] HIS VERSE [\B]
ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous? |
checking in..........beginning to key..................
.................................................. ...................... boy this is a cheap win :thumbup: |
ey yo i gotta tell u tho, if you good like reeeeeel good then ima ask you to be in da MC n da info on dat is
its me n my boy derek carson from east park aight n we makin our lil demo in a lil bit but i put dat shit on hold cuz i want some peeps to make it up there ya know what im sayin, like da roc has already said they was gon listen to our demo like ROCAFELLA RECORDS, n im just on here to get some mo talent wit us ya know out |
First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12
I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite I take this W, you dont even put up a fight! I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice |
upppn..........good battle............................................ .................................................. ............................................i went easy on you............................................... .........................be thankful
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[Verse1]
ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous?[/verse1] Weak kid rhymes No good punches Flow was ok.. but could use work Used kid rhymes to much....... Personals were lacked Wordplay was lacked Overall..........8/20 [verse2] First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12 I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite I take this W, you dont even put up a fight! I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice[/verse2] Straight... Dope punches good personals Dope wordplay Some funny lines Flow was good Overall......11/20 Vote--Technician- |
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thutch had a kool flow but he didnt have a single punch so basically the whole verse was filler, other than a personal or 2, not sayin much.. tech ive seen better from but he had some personals seasoned with a few punches here n there and a much better rhyme scheme so.. he hit his opponent harder |
i don't know what thutch was thinkin but that was weak, nothin hit good at all, he lacked punches, no wordplay, his opener
was weak and he lacked heat.. tec had an ill opener, nicer flow, betta punches, came with some ill barz..like tec said easy win... |
kind of a weak battle by both emcees.. thutch you had alot of gun talk but really your verse lacked creativity and wordplay.. you can talk bout much more than bustin a gun in someones ass
technician.. you also came weak in this battle.. yet you had enough wordplay.. and disses to take this shit hit this battle up with a vote and then ill poll vote in this here the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106253 |
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ya name is technician u say u nice wit dem cars
but dat ain't gon help u when u spittin 10 bars .....hmmm naw sorry too bad ya occupation can't help wit ya rhymes get da fuck out da game n go back to TOOL TIME almost a decent punch i see ya wit ya 9 mili piece! can't compare to my gun as soon as u see da AK ya bitch ass is on da run /\not punch nor personal so get out da game, dis is respect n u lost u just a bitch n my class can't fuck wit da boss /\nope wanksta, you wanna be known? well pump u in da anus now whos da lil bitch dats makin da other one famous? /\personal First thing is, what kinda name is Thutch12 I'll burn this herb introduce him to dutch hell /\not punch It's that simple to roll up ya verse and ignite I take this W, you dont even put up a fight! /\nope I liked ya wise cracks and attempt at punchlines I keyed in 5 minutes i guess u'd say its crunchtime /\average Theres 2 more bars for this bitch before the last call Ya mouth shattered for talkin Rec-less wit a glass jaw average Nothin special in this verse yet, really just a little advice Why you even steppin to a vet?, next time think twice /\average as wel this battle had no ''Wow'' lines but i think technician won due to better punches...both need some work on how to diss people keep it up |
ey well, everyone read my lil post
yall niggas is stupid! aight aight dats what yall need to write haha n den we'll see who got da last laugh |
Vote : tech
ayo, this kid thuch was sick.... his rhymes were basic.. you got killed by punches alone. keep practsin.... ayo, get at these battle vs mel battle vs. calis H.N.I.C |
This Was A 1sided Battle Tech Took This Easily With The Punches,Personals,Wordplay,Etc...
Vote=Tech Can Ya'll Vote On This??... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106273 |
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