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NewPort 01-12-04 06:03 PM

MichaelMadness vs. Derive
 
Ight Heres how it goes
no feeding
no biting
no swaying
no bitchin
no dick ridein
no crew votes
none of that bullshit
10-16 lines

Mike, you drop first
Derive, after
you know whats good

MichaelMadness 01-12-04 08:20 PM

NewBie or not, you still ain't rippin me /
Derive, is bout to get deprived of a victory /
I don't give a fuck bout ya History,
or how many Wins you hold /
My Record 0-0,
But its bout to be one n' owe /
I registered on R-B so my name could be exposed /
Hoped for some competition,But I'm battlin a Joke /
I get 3 things you don't, Votes, Hoes , n' Cash Flow /
Facin me, Son u'll get torn up like a Porno-stars asshole's /

When the truth is spoken /
nd' every voter has voted /
the victor won't be the one whom claimed to be iLL ,
It'll be the man that showed it /
you ain't xpierienced enough to know this /
U can't rhyme fer a livin yer shit is doomed,
I can see you in the future, sweepin Dust wit a Broom /
Son, I'll always be above you like the Sun and the Moon.......

MichaelMadness 01-12-04 08:30 PM

Some Half ass quick shit.............
Derive Get your shit posted by 10:30.
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Derive 01-12-04 09:50 PM

just say this....err blah....auspicious wanted me to battle u so w/e...a waste of time but nothing better to do...ill spit in a bit

Derive 01-12-04 10:31 PM

just finished watching a movie i keyed this in 5 mins...didnt have to try

MichaelMadness aint shit, i can beat him while typing blind
I think im typing too fast..
..Cuz my verse just blew up his mind
Ive forseeked the future, so the outcome wont be a surprise
kid said hes a gangster when..
..The only time he saw a 'clip' was when he was circumsized (a gun clip)
He asked me to give him tips, on how to keep his verse popping..
..if you wanna improve your skill, you should just start by stopping!
This kid's exhausted just to stay in my pace..this kid is struggling hard
Michael was never taught how to ride a bike..
..so how does he expect to handle these bars?
ya punches arnt delivering, there just bouncing back and causing you headaches
This kid says he got illness in his genes but..
..even if ya mom and dad tested positive for aids..u still wont have ill-genetics!

iight lets get some votes...

RaiD 01-12-04 10:42 PM

Flo: Derive
Punches: Derive
Wordplay: Derive
Beginner: MM
Ending: Definitely Derive
Structure: Derive

Vote: This was a 1 sided battle, it was mostly derive, although michael did have a nice beginner: NewBie or not, you still ain't rippin me /
Derive, is bout to get deprived of a victory /

but like i said b4 it was really 1 sided...nice battle pipz

Derive 01-12-04 10:46 PM

Uppin for votes...dont forget to poll

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Ja'e Roc 01-12-04 10:47 PM

this one should go to mm, but its 10 -16 lines not 18, rules are rules. I mean he's first 10 lines were nice (probally written), then the rest was wack (probally freestyle). If I could vote this one would be for Derive.

Derive 01-12-04 10:49 PM

^^ I appreciate the vote but can ya'll break it down atleast like RaiD did...this is why i didnt wanna battle in frontlines but MM is new so w/e....just break down ur votes like RaiD did...cmon lets get some people who can actually poll

Derive 01-12-04 10:54 PM

Uppin for some votes....


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(2nd UP)

MichaelMadness 01-12-04 10:56 PM

Ja'e Roc,
I wrote all that ish ....then posted it. None was previously written........................................... ..........

Derive 01-12-04 11:04 PM

Uppin for votes....cmon people, vote...


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(3rd UP)

Wise Ways 01-12-04 11:11 PM

Really one sided battle.....

punches... De took this by a long ways.. his popped/stopped line..and his genetics line for example

flow...this is tha only one were Mad got this

creativity...De he had solid wordplay...Mads was too basic

so

v/Derive

Hit this up with an honest vote....I'll poll vote with my alias
Ways |vs| Trivia

Derive 01-12-04 11:15 PM

^^Dont forget it poll vote....

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Abrupt 01-12-04 11:32 PM

punches: Derive
flow- Derive
Starter- both
Finsher- derive
wordplay- derive

final vote- Derive


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