Eh...Just read it...
 

I'm back...:thumbup:
so this is how it goes:
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But it is True, I Think...

Baddump Baddump Baddump

It is a heart beat...
It is there...

I believe...

at least hope...



For I cannot love...
and tha heart is tha creator...
tha creator of this delicate stature...


as You create tha need...
tha heart intertwines tha blood...


to your brain it goes...
and you feel:



Emotion...


and it overpowers you to tha point of a:


St-St--STut--STutter--er

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For those who get this poem: u r a poet indeed...

I'm not used to this format, I'm stumped even if I read with an open mind. Maybe its too deep 4 me. Seems like it has to do with the bodies biomechanisms or somethin. Like you took a scientific explaination of processing feelings and converted it into a poetic explaination of essence. It wouldn't necessarily mean I'm not a poet if I don't understand it, it just means I'm not on your poems scientific/poetic level. It just means your more of a poet than the person who doesn't understand, but I say that to make reason... Otherwise, no I'm not a poet. D*mn...I can identify what you are attempting so, I must be one level below you. Theres no point in attaching your understanding to an electric impulse and mentally ride on it, exploring the rest of your bodily system. But if it helps you find your inner peace then don't quit writing like that, because you'll uncover something phenominal if thats actually where your spirit wants you to journey. Thats my understanding, I don't know if I'm even close but hey keep writing. Maybe if I didn't get so many F's in school and actually did my work, I prolly would be able to understand this poem. Your a great poet indeed from what I can and can't see.

edit: if you could, can you PM me the explaination of this poem and how you converted the complex body functions 2 poetry and 2 an extent where it is very difficult to understand. one more thing... what is the method 2 your style? I'm very curious... is sethroph your inspiration if he is why? You seem to have that ff7 sethroph/cloud story line inbedded into your brain very well. Clouds anxiety.. Am I close? Hell no?

The chump is back from da grave, j/k man. You always seem to leave people in suspence or confusion with your poems man. Short but at the same time so fucking deep its unbeleiveable. Kinda understood part of it but you know how it goes. Hit me up n tell me da meanin or moral?? Spect JT

Once again the master is at work and has confused us all with his complex mind and way of writing. Or are we all just simple minded? jk, dont answer that. I have an idea of what this is about, but my guess is that it is wrong, so I wont waste your time. But I must say the master is back doing one of the many things he does best. Lol. Like that huh? lol Tty bout it later. Much respect.

thanks for lettin me in on it, although I was close when I mentioned science. and though I kno what it means, this poem remains great. How inspiring.

hey this is a great peice... i dont exactly understand it. its deep and real at the same time. im guessin ur tha masta at this!