Fuck Off
 

There's alotta fuckin hate flowin around,
all yall niggaz need to shut up and just sit the fuck down,
XLg's ain't even fuckin wit u clowns,
But still sea'n you niggaz, makin muthafuckas drown,
All of Yall could be on my level, if i buried myself,
Even God almighty couldn't give yall enough help,
Damn! We must be doing something right,
eatin all this beef, makes my rhymes sicker every nite,
take a hike, all you muthafuckas need to get a life,
dick ridin's the reason most of yall niggas, even tight,
i said my piece now ima leave it to the boss,
and if yall niggaz didn't get the picture.........FUCK OFF.

Honesty feels so fuckin good, when ya let it out in the open.

hmm.. and you come in my thread and diss me then you come with this.. wow i think your stupid.. cuz your stuff was whack.. your flow was alright, your structure was shit, your word play was shit, your vocab was shit.. overall 3 shits out of 4

i give it 4 shits down.

well, I'm not gona attack the dude. I mean, it's definitely a charged up spit, but any time i see down, clown, town, sound, etc, I feel like it's deja vu man.

Ste up the originality a little.

One

thanx for the non bullshit vote yo. all yall niggaz that hated it or talked shit about.(refer to title)

First off, fuck your songs and the shit you say
Diss my wife, but at least I got a bitch, you gay
You claim to be a Muslim but you Irish White
So fuck you fat boy, drop the mic, let's fight
Plus I punch you in the chest, weak hearts I rip
other bitches, gay and white, lethargic ass dickhead
I keep 'em comin while you runnin out of breath
Steady duckin while I'm punchin at your chest, you need to rest
Dilated, go ask your people how I leave ya
with your three CD's, nobody sees, when they released
Evidence, don't fuck around with real MC's
who ain't ready for no underground beef, so fuck geeks
I let you faggots know it's on for life
but you might die tonight, haha
Fat boy murdered on wax and killed
Fuck with me and take a heart pill, you know!

pm me what ya think. tell me if im in.i have two battles on right now! ppl still need to vote!

^^that was Just Lamb And Fuck Off Make Ya Own Thread......any way it was Whack..

Any way this was alright But Ya Structure need a bit of working on man....but ya flw was alright and there wasn't much wrong wit it man so yea that was good....Ya Vocab was To Simple...ya Wordplay also Need Working On Man But Other Wise It was Alright...I Still Think that was Too Short So its was Too Hard For u to Get betta Feedback So try and Lengthen Ya RHymes Out Aiight Man....PeacE....

Ok now Killer MC Look at the link below and realize that that bullshit u posted ain't even yours. Ive seen a line or two bitten but not a whole damn verse. That's bullshit.
http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric....8256A7900023080

U gotta be dumb to do this.

And u other fucks are stupider for not catching that shit earlier. I Hate u all.

i agree wit Da Killa Kid


Feels like this flo i spilled would be a waste
cuz everyone is filled wit hate and dis-taste
a face thats hidden is a face thats fake
take another rappers shit and claim it, shows no taste
KE* ur a disgrace, no pace -ients(patients) is what u made me
steal EM's shit shows that u is fuckin shady
everyone is drivin me fuckin crazy, wit responses that is so hazy,
be selfish, but know when to help-bitch, and know how to tell-shit
otherwise it leaves newb's helpless, wit no response, it is hard to develop-it
lost for words wit anger to increase in my mind-state
makes for hate-n-danger to delete all those who rhyme-fake
so those who agree got there mind-straight, and help to focus on this
hopeless hope bitch is probably all it will be and i know it
so hate on me cuz i could give a fuck-less
but if u post back, u make my shit is a suc-cess

KE - Killa Emcee

aiight man im out that was aiight but whateva cuz its jsut speakin my mind nothing thought out or put into depth

tnx for the feed uski, and for not posting ur own fuckin freestyle in here.

It was just to simplistic, and not creative enough. You have the right idea, to come hard and try not to let loose. Just need to add the creative punches and personals in there. Cause thats what people enjoy. Anyone who has seen and remembered my disses in here, knows I bring mad personals. Just work on it, think more. There aint nothing wrong with writing somthing in like 30 minutes. Just keep it up, and handle that little beef, aight hommie...

( RETURN THE FAVOR AND PEEP THE OPEN MIC IN MY SIG PLEASE, APPRICIATED )

I appreciate it yo. Ppl givin feedback that ain't hate or no bullshit like that, its straight honesty. Oh and I will handle that shit, They know who that shit's about.

more feedback yo