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Wuts Wrong /w Love
Wuts wrong with this Love,and the world,
its soo unfair,its full of despair, nobody tryng to make it all work better, its just one person per love sweater, nobody sharing theyre love with each other, why u ppls think is unsafe and slippery like butter, if we all just act the same,there wouldnt be doubts, all this shit is lame,just be your self,full of wealth, find someone,and love them for who they are, show them that you care,vise-versa for them, cause its gotta be the same feeling, no more dealing,or gambeling, love is hard to find,just go bind, with someone,and see if theyre the one, the one for you,life is like a clue, and full of rules,but theres tools, grab them and work on it, you will find someone to bond with, to mess with,to have fun with, go look now,before its the end, go out and look for a hand to lend, it might be useful,lots of help, with one self,go put up a shelf,for your pictures, and trophys,of ones heart you won,and look back, and see if you hurt them,call them,apoligize,cause you only supposed to have one lover, dont just go out and hurt ppl, cause out of it you make a sequal, feelings can be hurt easily, one wrong word or one wrong move,could end up in tears,fears,for one to be the same again.to show love again, dont hurt those feelings,then there will be minds up in ceilings, looking for what to do,cause ti was your fault foo, just treat others like you want to be treated,and maybe you will be greeted,again,and no mroe pain,love will come again, just heal those people you hurt,and all will be ok, if you out hurting ppls feelings all i can say is you need :help: |
that poem is the truth. I enjoyed all of it, every word. The majority of the US' people don't know your only supposed 2 find the right person for themselves and cherish them, they only know how to leave the ones they thought they loved for someone they'll just treat the same. They don't know how to use their heart. I'm very sure u use urs wisely. Its about time someone exposed this. Truthful poem containing great and rare wisdom within 4real.
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I loved the amount of truth and feeling you put into this. You put your thoughts that you felt into it and made it a greater piece. Mind is right on all counts. People should learn from what you just wrote. From the feelings and thoughts you just wrote, it seems as if you do know how to use your heart wisely. Now if only others would learn from it. Great job. Keep it up.
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