Annoying Ho's
 

I know all of you have had mint girlfriends that give a great lay, but a week into the realtionship you start to realize that bitch is annoying. Its happened to me anyways. But what you do after that is Dump that bitch on the side of the road where she cant get too your crib, just make sure you get the one last lay.
Check it out...

Either this bitch is crazy, or shes naturaly blonde,
Just stop talkin, cause of that Im actually fond,
Im emberassed walkin when I see people we know,
If only this bitch had cancer, I could legally grow,
Datin retards your answer, cause your equally slow,
Lock the door on the whore then frequently flow,
And constantly this bitch will see me closing the door,
Only way she gettin in is wit her cloths on the floor,
This bitch makin me wierd, cant drink when im sober,
If Im gone for a week you best be thinkin its over,

Fuckin Bitches.

that shit was hot
good word play
and soo true
you spit bout somthing
u wer used too and
it showed alot
wen i read it i could tell you wer annoyed
overall a great piece id say
Try to return the favor with some feed back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=106420

Yeah this was a good piece...kinda short but i liked it though....your structure in this was nice....you had good flow in this, it stayed on point....you had some nice multies in this piece, i liked that....i can relate to these things here, cause i write about that stuff too lol, but yeah this was a good piece, enjoyed the read...keep at it.

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alright spit, i feel ya tho on the topic heh.. (check out my I hate bitchs keystyle open mic found in my sig), anyways. this piece was pretty short and i think u could of went into more detail about some shit but other than that it was ok, btw thx for droppin feed on my tribulations piece

peace