Dialect OTYP vs Lokeye(plz vote)
 

aight rules are as follows

-10-15lines 2bars is 1line
-no hate d/r crew or newb votes
-no feeding biting or recycling
-verse due 20min after check in
-i spit first
-you must check in by 1:30am tonight

good luck

checkin in for battle good luck kid

i will drop before 15mins is up


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You can't check into 3 battles at one time.....sorry for tha free post..

just letting you know

it seems ive got pan hooked ready ta walk the plank/
this fags bout ta ge erased n/e way so he left his profile blank//1
this mus of went ta blockbuster hopin ta rent his game back/
came wack wit an 0-0 record but im prepared ta change that//2
home boi you is lame ta beat u i aint even gotta try ta rhyme/
you aint think ya own line he bought from the 5 and dime//3
nevermind ya spine my slugs fuck wit ya back/
i wanted ta battle but you ducked cuz you wack//4
im on a 7-0 streak and you aint about ta stop me/
matter fact since you in WA find a mountain ta climb and top me//5
u've got no chance ta pop me son i am the devil/
aint an elevator in the world that ull bring u 2 my level//6
im'a rebel and kid dat dont mean im from the south/
im verbal denist so bitch you better watch ya mouth//7
cuz what im about is killin leave they bodies tossed in lakes/
i it pussy like you for breakfast like frosted flakes//8
im bossin slates and outlinin niggas in chalk/
lokeye useless like the e-mail file labeled "bulk"//9
dawg you aint glowin but my shine make um like ray do charles see/
i leave you bleedin on the ground like a bitch ass new b/
and when you stuble away wit da "scarface" it aint no movie//10

goodluck

not my best but w/e

dont be late

srry a few typos

heres the line sthat need to be changed to be right

line 2 should say

he mus of went to blockbuster....

line 3 corection

he should say you in the 5 n dime part

line 8 should say...

"i eat" not "i it"

line 10 supposed ta be

"ray charles do see" not "ray do charles see"

thanx

not very nice ....
if i was lokeye...i battle immediately.............
this is like a free win.....n
no strong punches...
maybe a flow...but whats a flow without punches and shit........
.............no real foundation,,,,,

your dialect reflects you're kinda dumb, but that's okay
I've seen some emcees come hard as the cocks you suck all day
and you've got much in common 'cause your soundbombin' is gay
so I'll level your head so it can look just like your state

my shits deep like your aquarium,
your shallow speak ain't scaring'em
I'll hit you with my poison dart frog
till your minds fogs with delerium

you really should get out some time, 'cause your state ain't that dirty
your dialect just hides the fact you're soft but I'll just blurt it
YO DIALECT IS SOFT, your secrets out, now who've you murdered?
really I'm a cunning linguist. you're a dimwit in his thirties

someone vote, please, how'm I supposed to elevate without votes?

here is your vote

uppin for votes

this is my first time upon

could that 1st vote be taken away cause he didnt explain it

dialect killed em easy...........
punches: dialect by a lil'
flow: dial
humour: lok
opener:dailect
clozer: dialect
dis iz not a d.r or hate.....honest....
dialect- good verse,,,,,tite flow.....werk on punches a lil'
lokeye- keep elevating....u had an okay flow.....werk on ya punches 2......
overall- okay battle......
vote: dialect
repay favor...dont got site but it n front linez....first page
killer emcee vs. dr.punch
or go 2
killer emcee vs. michael madness

uppin #2 get some votes plz and thnx leave a link i will be more then glad to hit you up wit an honest vote thnx to all who vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106644
daz mah link.....plze voteee***********************
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cmon thats fucked i voted on like 5 or 6 battlkes and still no replies come peeps

uppin for votes #2

word this is tru in a sense of mind so...word...
vote/Dia...