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Bribeone1 5-3 vs Feeble Minded 5-4
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Ehe the champion..
Ill drop Thurs wont b here Fri. Feeb well agree to line limit over AIM. |
Hi Largo . .
checking in. voted on: Avalon vs. Fgee Evolve vs. Trapt M~M vs. Taktik vs. 13th |
ok feeble.
..check!! your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him defeat him again?..- .I'll meet him first when he steps in the door drive his head through it and put a new look on board we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status they named me the baddest, to kill without trying I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM. on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake. I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me I also can dull, ...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !. ..G luck home-E *edited some typos* |
when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ...
cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial .. cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do .. your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three .. u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out .. that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww .. |
Nice Battle Here.. Bribe Had Nice Wordplay And A Few Good Personals..But Feeble Pretty Much Killed This Battle In Punches And He Equaled Up In Personals....He Also Had A Better Structure...
Qoutables: Quote:
Funny And Nice Personal..Good Job, LoL Quote:
Nice Personal And Good Humor.. Quote:
Witty And Funny, LoL Feeble Also Had A Few Other Better Lines, The VB3 Line Was Good And His Closer Was Ok... Personals - Tie Punches - Feeble Structure - Feeble Vocab - Feeble (Some Parts Of Bribe's Didnt Rhyme...budget/plummet) Wordplay - Bribe Opener - Feeble (Bribe's Was Played) Closer - Tie (Neither Were Too Bad) Vote - Feeble, Just Better Overall Verse And Harder Punches |
fuck...
I was tryin to stay SOoooooooooooooooooo far away from this battle... K asked me to vote... Feebs asked... fuckfuckityfuckfuck..! Ok... breakdowns... line for line... Bribed'allofus... your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning I got it... yes I did... nice play... no hard hitting... naw mean..? in a 30 line this would've been better... 4 remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him probably your best couplet... damn good... 7 defeat him again?..- .I'll meet him first when he steps in the door drive his head through it and put a new look on board I saw where you were going with this... or where I would go with it... good shit... 5 we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status no... I saw it... still don't like it... 2... they named me the baddest, to kill without trying I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM. *shrugs shoulders* I kinda get it... not hard hitting... 3... on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget if you'd have said Bush or the budget i'd got a 8... 7 nice line... watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake. lol... fruit cake lines never go out... 8 I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me I also can dull, ...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !. if you didn't see candle you're a fucking idiot... good... not for a closer... the bush line would've been the closer... 5... total:40 out of... 80... F+ Feeb'sassisheldshutbyAislecinco... when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ... cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know wow... off rip... 8... Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial .. cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial if you get it... it's funny... if you don't it's meaningless... 4... Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd nope..! 1... M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do .. take out just would've flowed better.. other than that filler... 2... your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three .. lol... I don't like the set up... but... lmao... 5... u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out .. fuckin stupid... if he paves the road... it's already flat... *shakes head* you're better than this... 4... that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww .. if you'd have left out Expression With Words: it'd be alot better... 6... total: 30 out of 70... F... vote: K. Largo... damn good battle here... n' soon Feeb's you'll be able to beat me... :D lol... You too bribe... bitches I aint playin..! |
Vote - Feeble
I feel his verse juss came better as a full package than Bribe's verse did ... Bribe's verse had it's moments ... BUt Feeb's verse was more complete wit punches ... wordplay and such ... Was a good battle to read ... But Feebs took this in my opinion ... Peace |
I Agree With Mentill On This... I Thought Feeb's Verse Was More Consistant & Complete... Bribe's Shined At Certain Points.. But Feeb's Was Good All The Way Through... In Which Case
Vote Feebs |
Bribe
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning 4/10....weak remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him 9/10....haha, dope defeat him again?..- .I'll meet him first when he steps in the door drive his head through it and put a new look on board 5/10....weak we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status 4/10....wack they named me the baddest, to kill without trying I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM. 6/10....good wordplay on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget 6/10....good watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake. 6/10....funny, but played I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me I also can dull, ...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !. 4/10....weak closer 44/80=55% Feeble when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ... cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know 7/10....nice Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial .. cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial 4/10....nahh Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd 7/10....nice punch M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do .. 3/10....nope your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three .. 5/10....weak u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out .. 5/10...decent that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww .. 5/10....not hard hitting 36/70=51% You are both my boys, and this was a close one although I've seen much better from both overall, I think bribe takes it with better punches a more consistant verse Vote - Bribe |
V. Feeble.
Both had ok verses, and both came a bit played. But Feeble hit harder with his punches, and was overall more consistent than Bribe. Fav line of Bribes: remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him Good verses from both, but Feebs edges it out. your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three .. Fav line of Feebs^: |
Bribe got this i thought .. just all around better lines from his verse .. better concepts, more original lines i felt.
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Lol. Feeble didnt really have anything i enjoyed .. the play off his sig was weak and the Vb3 line was worded horribly. = / Wasnt a bad battle, but Bribe got it IMO. |
4 - 3 me. Thanks for the good feedback guys - i will use it & its appreciated.
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Bribe's Verse
your the current champ?.who's this kid imitiating U dont size up to a drizzle when you're supposed to B reigning Eh, okay. remain thru it all ..the single hand that feeds him who says my son is spoiled just look at the times I've beat him Lol, old concept, but very nicely worded to give it a fresh spin. defeat him again?..- .I'll meet him first when he steps in the door drive his head through it and put a new look on board heh, again old concept, but with a fresh spin put on it. Not as nice as the son/beat him though. we know your running for supermod ...and slowly cprogress but I'll let u beat me ...if your campaigning for status Yuck mouth they named me the baddest, to kill without trying I saw your narcissim when i heard u riding on I aM. M'kay on the real why push?. when by yourself u will plumet have u seeing stars without Bush and his budget lmao, nice watch dude bake, cause in target practice I shoot fake christmas passed now.... so I lay rest to this fruit cake. Nope, there was no fresh spin this time I bag the lame.. and u can ask any bitches that know me I also can dull, ...... so from now on make wishes and blow me....! ! ! !. Didn't help your verse Feeb's Verse when i think of the legends, your image is lingering slow ... cuz if this shit is wack, u taught me everything that i know Lol, nice Bribe we're searching for dopeness, & your verse is inertial .. cuz if that's the stuff.. then you're in a hostess commercial Lol, tryin way too hard here Largo its time to clean up your mess, i even threw in the rag only time he's outta my league, is when i boot him from tag'd Much better M~M says im elevatin quick, no way i'll reckognize you cuz I'll quit rapbattles.com just before the second i do .. Naught Feel-N Thaat your only delayin my options, and your just a hooligan g he's makin rapbattles more horrible, than vbulletin three .. Yeah, no shit...hate the new board. Not a bad punch, but poorly worded u can pave the road to success, for combatin ya doubts but then i'll come along, and I'll fucking flatten it out .. Me likes that will amount, to me revealing ur wackness, slews cuz like ur sig says: Expression With Words: Eww .. BLeh, Nahhh OVERALL: Very close battle. Both had some really good punches...and both had some bleh punches. I'm gonna have to say Feeb's edges it. Bribe, you might have taken it if it weren't for all the played concepts. You had a fair overabundance of them. ANyway, not a bad battle guys. Enjoyed reading for the most part. Vote ~ Feebs |
By the way... I read this. Bribe took it
Winning 5-4 Bribe - 6-3 Feebs 5-5 |
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