Weezy Vrs. Gillz
 

10 lines
no hate/crew votes.


LET'S GO:

Man im feelin crooked dog im bustin to kill/
go fishin',you get stuck up wit a hook in your gills'/

make it hard to breathe like fish out of water/
gills be the type tryin to get sum dick for a quater/

rippin' this cat sort of like his mother in tights/
goldfish flush you let you take a ride down the pipe/

gills and fish got sumthin in common/
yall both stink and cant fit any condoms/

do you like they do on docks rip drip your innerds/
i aint talkin bout your mom but havin' fish for dinner/

i had to post up cuz my class almost over.............................................. .............
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kool..kool...ok here I go//You couldn’t choose a tight rhyme/
even if you used Langston Hughes mind as a lifeline/

You fuckin flamer of course you cant spark with us/
Im so hot I make hell look like Antarctica/

Your styles more broke than poverty/
It’s goin out of fashion faster then starter bein a commodity/

Aint no stoppin me goin through rhyming evolutions daily like the Cane Madness/
Havin a passiveness except when bat a lin these faggots that’s always braggin shit/

weezy is just another name that goes on my list//
MTV has a show for you so your "Dismissed"

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For both.. the seperate bars are wack.. condense it as a whole verse..

Weezy came pretty basic.. punches were slightly played. Flow/structure was nice, a good read.. The theme was held throughout also I think.. good or bad.... dunno..
Gillz came a little better with the punches.. slightly more creative, better vocab.. flow was off at times tho..
Close battle but..

Vote - Gillz

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Oh K 4 More Still Uppin............................................. ......

kool..kool...ok here I go//You couldn’t choose a tight rhyme/
even if you used Langston Hughes mind as a lifeline/

^^^^I think this line right here killed hime but overall it was nice.

Weezy lines were Ok, but he kept talkin bout fish and shit.

VOTE~GILLZ

ya both were whack but i would go with gillz...****************************************** ********************************************

ya both were whack but i would go with gillz...****************************************** ******** ************************************

ya both were whack but i would go with gillz...****************************************** ******** ************************************but hey i will vote after 100

ya both were whack but i would go with gillz...****************************************** ******** ************************************but hey i will vote after 100...yo..yo

hmmm....

Weezy..ur verse was pretty weak for the most part...rhymes werent' very good but they were better than some of the trash I've seen in the Front lines...you're nameplay was decent...although u kept on and on about fish and it really got pretty annoying...ur structure wasn't all that great either...the only thing I really liked about urs was the flow, which for the most part stayed pretty good..

Gillz...fix ur structure...and shorten ur bars...the mismatched bars really fucked up the flow on some lines...but u had a few decent lines on him...the MTV line was played as hell...the Antartica line was iight, cuz it rhymed nicely..u have good rhymes, and u put a little depth into some of ur punches (using people's names that aren't an everyday figure on TV for most people), but that can also cause problems...u won this simply by having a more complex and advanced looking verse but u have a lot to work on....

vote- Gillz

this needs votes... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442