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Logik - Droppin some freeverse- critique?
I take you down,verbal warrior Smoke ya like a chronic pound Mystical like morador, here to claim my logik underground Fuck the white wizard, call me a lyrical hobbit Destroyin your game, like knives did to john bobbit I drop your whole crew like trumans bombs on nagasaki I own mc's like property, while you scream "don't stock me!" Splittin lines, my design, this devine circuit breaker Bury your rhymes if you decline this undertaker Tastfull like fine wine, I paralyze ya like spines Im verbally aligned, like Jedi Mind, I shine gangsta rappaz loose ya nines, Mainstream artists I decline True poetic lyrical skill growin like vines I got more game then matel, runnin through you like crisco As I verbally Excel, I keep it tastful like Nabisco you tryin to reach the top? you bout as high as elmo Can I get a reply? or are you just stuck like velcro Show me your sign, ya two facin gemeni Keep it real, cause this calls for a written reply |
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very simple..but a decent drop..your wordplay was very~very simple..but it seemed okay!peace~
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Yeah this was a alright piece here....structure in this was alright i thought.....you had some good flow in this as well, it stayed on point through out the whole piece....you also had some good vocab i thought too....had some alright multies....overall a alright piece, good read....keep at it.
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