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10 lines
u spit first
due tommorow

Yo Checkin In...........................
....................................
Ima Spit Hold Up

Yo This Battle Is Over Before It Begins/
Im Gonna Make Ya Feel Bad,because Battlein Me Is Like Comitting Sins//
A Good Battle Is What Im Really Seekin,so Dont Choke/
Oh Well Fuckit Im Gonna Rip You Then Stick The Mic Down Ya Throat//
Yo While Im Spittin Dude You Should Take Some Notes/
Im Gonna Rip You And Its Gonna Get Cold,so I Suggest You Should Take Ya Assdown To Salvation Army And Get Some Coats//
After This Battles Over Bitch Your Gonna Need Alot Of Votes/
Cus Im Gonna Murder You Where It Hurts The Most//
Im Gonna Rip You Like Tupac Tryed To Rip Biggie From The East Coast/
Im Eatin Ya For Breakfest,so What Kind Of Butter Should I Put On The Toast//?(lol)
Im The Champion And Your The Challenger/
You The Wackest Mc On Rapbattles Top 10 Wackest Calender//
There Aint No Talent Here,i Can See It In Your Eyes All Im Smellin Is Fear/
Your Wack Ass Stressin Me Out So Im Gonna Do What An Old Man Does,get A Beer//
7 Lines Three More To Go/
You Better Tell Ur Friend You Need Help So They Can Come Play Captain Save A Hoe//
U Done Forsho,your Doom/
Im Gonna Have You Sing Like B2k Bada Beem Bada Boom//
You Quieter Then The Moon/
After I Kill Ya I Hope You Come Back Soon//

Done

someone close this the stupid idiot didnt follow the rules you spit 21 lines when i clearly said 10...

No Thats Ten


The (//) Ends Each Line
Duh Your A Fucken Rookie

UUUHHHHH no your the idiot... you spit 10 bars... well... 10 1/2 bars... more like 12 or 13... but neway... yeah... Rookie

Oh Well I Aint Trippern I Wouldve Ripped This Pussy Anyways

Excuses Excuses Hahahahahaha

herb i dont extend my shit just so its sounds good dont post here again
closed

iight..ima just # ya lines so u can see, ok

Yo This Battle Is Over Before It Begins/ [1]
Im Gonna Make Ya Feel Bad,because Battlein Me Is Like Comitting Sins// [2]
A Good Battle Is What Im Really Seekin,so Dont Choke/ [3]
Oh Well Fuckit Im Gonna Rip You Then Stick The Mic Down Ya Throat// [4]
Yo While Im Spittin Dude You Should Take Some Notes/ [5]
Im Gonna Rip You And Its Gonna Get Cold,so I Suggest You Should Take Ya Assdown To Salvation Army And Get Some Coats// [6]
After This Battles Over Bitch Your Gonna Need Alot Of Votes/ [7]
Cus Im Gonna Murder You Where It Hurts The Most// [8]
Im Gonna Rip You Like Tupac Tryed To Rip Biggie From The East Coast/ [9]
Im Eatin Ya For Breakfest,so What Kind Of Butter Should I Put On The Toast// [10]
Im The Champion And Your The Challenger/ [11]
You The Wackest Mc On Rapbattles Top 10 Wackest Calender// [12]
There Aint No Talent Here,i Can See It In Your Eyes All Im Smellin Is Fear/ [13]
Your Wack Ass Stressin Me Out So Im Gonna Do What An Old Man Does,get A Beer// [14]
7 Lines Three More To Go/ [15]
You Better Tell Ur Friend You Need Help So They Can Come Play Captain Save A Hoe// [16]
U Done Forsho,your Doom/ [17]
Im Gonna Have You Sing Like B2k Bada Beem Bada Boom// [18]
You Quieter Then The Moon/ [19]
After I Kill Ya I Hope You Come Back Soon// [20]

Thats 20 lines...10 bars just like the other cat said

A Bar = 2 lines

For Example:

Leavin Ya Breath Less and Dead, killed wit eas
Only time u blazed up when u payed for trees

^ One Bar

Didnt Understand my Rage when i spit
Show you first hand and wreck ya shit

^ Two Bars

Didnt know, steppin into this battle ya dead
Not commin back, be sure so ill cut of ya head

^ Three Bars

Your shits wack so ima teach ya a lesson
kill u so fast, "what happened?" - have ya gessin

^ Four Bars

blah blah blah...basically thats only what i heard
Why u battlin me... ill devour all ya fuckin words

^ Five Bars

Thats what a bar is...2 lines


Leavin Ya Breath Less and Dead, killed wit eas <-- 1 Line
Only time u blazed up when u payed for trees <-- 1 Line
Didnt Understand my Rage when i spit <-- 1 Line
Show you first hand and wreck ya shit <-- 1 Line
Didnt know, steppin into this battle ya dead <-- 1 Line[/B]
Not commin back, be sure so ill cut of ya head <-- 1 Line
Your shits wack so ima teach ya a lesson <-- 1 Line
kill u so fast, "what happened?" - have ya gessin <-- 1 Line
blah blah blah...basically thats only what i heard <-- 1 Line
Why u battlin me... ill devour all ya fuckin words <-- 1 Line

You Dont End Lines With // Every Time You Finish The Rhyme Is A New Line

That should sum up what a bar and a line is...seeing that you were havin trouble and didnt understand i broke it down

*Note - I Didnt Try One Bit In The Rap That Was Posted Up There, It Took Me One Minute To Write And Was Wrote Only To Help Him Understand, I Wasnt Going To Actually Write A Regular Verse Because It Was Not Needed