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dw. 01-13-04 04:56 PM

dw VS .:K:. (beef)
 
15 lines max
all rules

u spit first K....gud luk...u gonna fuckin need it!

.:K:. 01-14-04 11:46 AM

checking in................................................ .....................when you get on and i am pm me and we will both spit within 20 mins of check in......................pz

dw. 01-15-04 02:20 PM

CHECKIN IN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....................... .................................................. ..................................^^^o.k 20 mins a piece!

.:K:. 01-15-04 03:07 PM

ite man jst seen this..........................in.................. .................................................. ............................pz

.:K:. 01-15-04 03:18 PM

beef?lol waste,

first of congrats to dw..for being in the top 10 highest wins feel sure to check-it,
wait hes also got the 2nd highest looses..so how the fuck can we respect-it?,
i thaught we could squash this beef like 2 mature adults,
people neva read your shit..they see dw and hit cancel more than de-faults,
d's got ghost writes...never comes hard and loves to bite,
shit face it dawg..your shit gets slept on more than nites,
i bet d puts shit in his verse bout me leaving CeNtRal cause i couldnt handle-it,
my awnser was instant..i got mad luv for the crew..jst not the bitch who ran that shit,
you'll give me another loss..thanks man thats a kind thing to do,
about 50 more offers like that and i could be....well um....you.


......................................fuck beef.

.:K:. 01-15-04 03:37 PM

omg take an hour then man............................................... .................................................. ............................

dw. 01-15-04 03:55 PM

jus seen this didnt know you were online.....i'll spit now giv me a min............................................... .................................................. .1

dw. 01-15-04 04:11 PM

snap ya intercostal-muscles so ya vertibrae slide...
now you know why ur always flat on ya BACK side...
kill K in an instant...battlin noobs keeps wins consistant...
but i gotta say dawg u were persistant as an assistant...
i must be shakin ya system cos ur a nervous wreck...
i always pay 4 wot i break...so how much is ya neck...
dislocate ya elbow joint so it luks like im clonin bone...
u producin nothin ere...like im rhymin etherestrone...
o.:K:. you've jus been ripped like mail on christmas day...
no-ones interested in instant...jus check ya tryouts in-tray...1

4 the dumb shits-
-K was my number 2 in central
-etheresterone = drug inside the pill which stops women avin babies

alrite uppin this!

osiruz 01-15-04 04:17 PM

damn this was nice and slept on....

punches: K
personals: Tie...both are nice...
imagery: Dw
structure: dw
Flow: Dw...
Played: K

vote: DW...

he was more original and his shit flowed better Imo, this was very close tho...

please return the favor and vote on this battle: ILL battLe

Wise Ways 01-15-04 04:17 PM

decent battle.... one of k's best....
k gots punches....DW's pay for tha neck line was played
dw got flow
personals was tied....
and wordplay was tied....
good battle fellas
but punches got this...

so

v/K

hit this up with an honest vote...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=106991&page=2

-Da Jacka- 01-15-04 04:25 PM

Nice battle feelin ya both ..
dw u had a bit played concepts.
didnt feel yall punches but K took it in that area.
Vote- K for havin better punches ....l

nice verses tho..u cats arent bad

Peep the Link man //Cuz i peeped ya shit honestly do the same.pc
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106125

Freeman 01-15-04 04:25 PM

iight...

can tell this is gona be a close battle...

dw... you had a tight structure dawg... some nice wordplay... some lines were quite complex aswell... flow was good through most, you just lost the flow on the closer, and once in the body of the verse... you had some nice punches in there... some hit hard... and one very long word... vocabulary... nice... but the bar where you used it didnt make sense... quite a few hard hittin personals aswell...

fav bar...

'i must be shakin ya system cos ur a nervous wreck...
i always pay 4 wot i break...so how much is ya neck...'


K... dw took you on structure a think... you did have a consistent flow tho... nice... some nice wordplay... punches about matched the standard of dw's... this is damn close...

and then...

'you'll give me another loss..thanks man thats a kind thing to do,
about 50 more offers like that and i could be....well um....you.'


it was even until you spit that... that is what won you this battle... had me laughin... very good

no hate... honest as a could be...

vote - .:K:.

both of you hit this up please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107007

thanks...

OUT

.:K:. 01-15-04 04:34 PM

ite 4-1 k but 2-0 on polls thx every1............................................ ....uppin(1).....................................p z

GaZeeBo 01-15-04 04:40 PM

aight i think that k got this because he was reayd for this

he came very strong and his punches hit harder and were more consistant throughout his verse

this was a close battle but i think K pulled it out because of the punches

my vote-k

yo hit up the battle in the sig please

:) 01-15-04 04:43 PM

wow good battle.. i feel like k came with harder punchlines and a more complexed verse than dw

metas were in tact and also wordplay... hit this battle up with a vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107140


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