TheUnderRated vs Excedrin
 

10-12 lines
blindspit 30 minutes..
no crew/hate/dr/whatever..
checkin and lets do this..

checking in

kool.....................................keyin

This kid said he was ill so i wanted to battle but he took himself...
you got beat by this kid..http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=106060..check the link then kill yourself...
your on a lower level and i'm holding the elevator on the 13 floor.....
like the center of the earth you always heated but never behold the HArd..core..
your new to this like pets droping nothin but shit ain't been trained yet..
talking shit i'll shut you down faster than evacuatin school bomb threats..
your brain turns to slow i use my x ray optical and watch your brainwaves...
then script my shit into your chest cause the TheUnderRated N graves...
First battle like you set your clock wrong you came to fast so i'll clock ya..
if you were an rap athlete wearing tighty whiteys i still wouldn't jock ya..
i'm leavin you with a headache but your the answer to the problem i create..
See the problem is no new to RB's challenge me cause of all the MC's i ate...

Look at that pic...holy shit a she-male, you about about to feel my wrath/
Im glad you posted that pic..so know everybody could get a good laugh/
I don’t wanna be hearin wack rhymes, but battlin u im bound to hear those/
Call me a mathematician, the way I subtract your lyrical skills down to Zero/
I bring dreams of dread as your dealing with street... stay discreet/
Multiple personalities compete like School Of Hard Knocks worn by geeks/
No need to fake it your flavor cant be tasted/
A penny for your thoughts is too much for the words you wasted/
This jack is no ripper so wat if something bit?/
Your like candy bars in a pool you really aint shit/
One questin for you ...You suck at Rapping, so why even act legit/
And ur answer was..But Excedrin... MY MOM SAID I CAN DO ANYTHING IF I PUT MY MIND-TO-IT!/

its called a blindspit meaning you don't feed off my verse....meaning we type at the same time so you had no way of seeing that picture unless you waited till i was done and fed...meaning your dumb....uppin for votes....

Yo one sided battle...

Ex fed off... and thats like one of tha lowest things you can do
Even though he fed.. Under still had better punches...with a nice flow
Under very creative... and nice vocab....

so

v/Under

hit this up please.. I took tha time to vote on yours.. so do tha same...It sbeing slept on..... thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=106287&page=2

uppin this for the second time lets get some poll votin starting here people please thanx alot drop a link and i'll hit it up ....one.......

hehe yea...Excedrin did break the rules by feedin off theunderrated. Excedrin did drop a decent verse tho...sum punches were iight and the flow was der...but he did break a rule. Also, UnderRated's verse was better...hardcore punch was witty but could of had better wording.

v/ - TheUnderRated

Well, Underrated would get my vote just because Excedrin fed... but regardless, Underrated came better. He had more original and complex punches, good try Excerdrin but i can tell your new to this... good battle yall, keep battling and elevating

vote - underrated

Feedings dumb specially ona blind spit. But Underrated won anyway cause he had some nice personals and puncjes. Also it was more complicated and original. Props to both for alright verses

uppin this for the third time people need some more poll votes thanx......................................

^^^^sumthing like what wise ways sed except this line

This kid said he was ill so i wanted to battle but he took himself...
you got beat by this kid..http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=106060..check the link then kill yourself...
i wasnt really feelin this line=underated

excedrin clearly took this battle.. theunderated had alot of elementary wordplay.. and word kid that link line was kind of herbish i suggest you get a brain and take that crap out of your style

excedrin- you had some nice punchlines in this battle.. wordplay was pretty ill

flow- excedrin
punchlines- excedrin
simplicity- the underated
multies- neither
metas- excedrin

vote- excedrin

Not badd at all from both..

Originality - Underrated.. other dude fed off him
Punches - Underrated.. original and hard hittin, complimented wiv a fluid flow
Personals - Excedrin had more but only coz he used Underrated's verse as ammo
Flow - Both.. easy to follow tho Excedrin had some strange rhymes

VoTe - Underrated

Edged most catergories but also the fact that other dude didnt follow the battles rules.