Yo yo yo, my fellow artist...
 

Wassup, who wants to flex...

Fuck it yo...

This cat is ill...but you can't catch my sickness//
The mic's my supplier, so ain't no of curin' this illness//
I'm realis, killin' mc with half a word//
"Sig" on you fuckas till ya "null" from the verbs//
My word make you nervus, this wordsmith is perfect//
I slap the girlish, and smoke the dope like a Turkish//
So what's up, not the doc...this rabbit multiplies//
You clowns, the only joke ya'll got is throwin' pies//
Throw a punchline, slam so hard I shiver the stadium//
Complex raps freeze ya mercury to uranium//
Of course I had to spit it...this lugi's for the track//
Bob ya fuckin' knoggin' like ya dippin' forth and back//
I'm not a snitch now, but I'm quick to report the whack//
To myself, and leave'em shelved neatly back to back//

Yo...

You should have just posted your verse in your first post though.

But this was ok....your decent structure in this i though....the flow in this was alright, it got off at points through out the piece though but still decent....you had some alright vocab in this....some alright multies, try adding some more though....but keep at it.