"I Always Leave My Lights On"...
 

This is a poem from my major work for my last year of school...A whole set of poems all based around this one character very concious of the mysteries of life which results in a condition of schizophrenia..provoked by alot of other elements throughout his existance...anyway...here is one of the major pieces in the collection so Enjoy...Every piece in it is legend worthy haha...Just respect it I guess...

This World Decieves Me & Laughs All In Its Initial Motion..
If You're Distanced, Thank Your Creator, Your Pain In Livins Over..
Animals Caged Within Hope, Should Pride Their Secluded Castle..
Whilst I Shuffle To A Rat-Race, I Will Probably Fail To Master..
This Life Is Not A Game, A Dice Only Fall 6 Ways..
The Possibilities Are Endless, Therefore Can Not Be Classified..
So Why Are People Saddened As To What They Can't Understand..
I Kept Emotions Bottled Up, Its What It Means To Be A Man..
Yet Life Isn't About You, Nor Me Or Any Other...
Its Like Labelling Music As What Lies Behind An Album Cover..
Whether Writtens Of Halo Scripts Or Creating Your Fable Twists..
The Masses All Compete As To How Many Their Table Sits..
Many Struggle To Find A Label That Fits..
Hence, Them Paying Close Attention To Those That Wrap Their Gifts..
Religion Takes Time, Which Sees It Neglected By Commercialism..
The Worlds Of Middle Land, Seek To Un-Earth This Rhythym..
As Where There Is No Other Source To Materials..
The Hope Is Rested Upon The Figures Of Forces, Above Imperial..
Yet Life Has No Meaning, Don't Try To Define...
Don't Even Compare It, As You'll Have Nothing To Find..
For You Can Not Personify, The Thing The Technique Derives From..
I Can't See Why I'm Here, So I Will Always Leave My Lights On..

Thankyou...Pz...

Just a couple of replies would be nice..oh my god this is ridiculous..especially for a fucken overflowing community of text-cees...

i like the way you addressed your topic, the way you wrote it out and explained it. your intro pulled me into the piece for at first i couldn't see where you were taking this piece. the meaning of life is something from time to time i find myself thinking about, and i too came up with the thought that maybe there is no meaning, that we are just here to live and die, but that seems so pointless and sad. the way you ended it was well written, and ended it nicely. should post up some more from this set sometime.

~Tera~
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Yeah...I'm still workin on the collection so I may post up some others...be on the lookout ay...Cheers..Pz..

This was a real deep dope peice..I liked the words you used to explain your self..it made me think..and dont think I'm being funny when I say this touched my heart..it was mildly entertainin'..but still nice..

Cheers mate..^...Glad it got through to you ay...Pz...