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Shortay420 01-14-04 06:52 PM

Let Myself Fade Away
 
* Your love has got me tangled and trapped
* Playing those games you play.
* You had me to the point of death
* Thought you'd be glad if i'd fade away.
* You said words that ensured
* Forever there you would always be
* Time has shown me just one thing
* It's what a bullshit pact you made to me.
* You told your friends what a pimp you were
* And how we'd done the deed.
* Why cant your friends see that your full of shit
* B/c that never happened with me.
* I can't believe i got so trapped
* I couldn't run away.
* No matter how many times you hurt me
* I'd always let you stay.
* I can't believe i got so trapped
* Allowing myself to be played.
* The only way to fix this shit
* Is to allow myself to fade away.

** This is my first one so please dont be to crude... lol **

varentao 01-14-04 08:35 PM

It has a kind of simple truth to it. Really makes it seem 'real', if you know what i mean. The feel of one reminiscing, going through the motions as one looks back at his memories.

It's good as it is. But also something that can be built upon.

..resp...

Shortay420 01-14-04 09:05 PM

Thanks for the reply. It was my first one so i didnt really no where to start, but i totally understand what your saying. Thanks again.


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