Brethren vs. Danksta
 

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Check check swoosh!.....My verse will be up...............maybe tonite...................................

Im in the mood to key...So here ya go

Opener-I'll do it once,So i wont have to Stomp-this-bitch-again,I'll drop-this-kid-with-pens,Fuck bein a flyweight...Allow me to introduce ya'll to REN-FROM-MICHIGAN

Unleashin the terror-i aint on no ‘gay shit’ when i 'BUST-ON-YOU'/
cause i stay with 'SOMETHIN-AT-MY-SIDE', like the 'TWINS' from 'STUCK-ON-YOU'//

brain-and-framework, equipped-with-an-ego/
like a 'LIFETIME-PHILIDELPHIA-FAN', i 'STAY-WITH-A-EAGLE'//

like i said im-egotistical, the original-lyrical-cannibal, a hipocriteral-liberal, and hysterical when asked if Brethran is intellectual/


like messin-around with a ‘DOCTORS-CUSTOMERS’, this kid is ‘FUCKIN-WITH-MY-PATIENCE’/
you-a-ugly-bitch-too, Ren could fuck ‘ALEXANDER-HAMILTON’, and still couldnt ‘DATE-10s’// (yeah.. if you didnt know Hamilton is the guy on the 10 dollar bill)

Aiight.....Tried a little different style....Lets see if it works

Damn, shit just came up, I got to finish another battle, so I can't drop until I finish one of them, sorry. I'll drop as soon as one of them closes.

Its cool yo................................................ .................................................. .......................................

Uh.....No show? or wtf....................................

No, I'ma drop today, some stupid shit came up. .

I kill rap bitches, Danksta 'leaning towards heaven', so I'm 'Hell-bent'-when-I'm-chokin-her,
Ha, with verses so wak, no wonder you had to tell-them-what-was-your-opener,
In the middle of your punch, your arm just takes a direction-change,
Hit yourself in the face, like I was Jet Li, in my Lethal Weapon-stage,
Rap isn't a game for midgets that don't tell the truth, that's what this 'imp-lied',
A battle with me, like retarded kids opening Christmas presents, dude gets ripped-wide,
Claiming you hard...is that blood or tomato sauce?, like scared troops-in-Italy,
Your verse is like 'diving in the shallow end', I'm a giant shark, while you screaming super-fish-ally (LOL),
Quit trying to rhyme, put the 'mouse' away, run away back to your 'crawl-spot',
Little kid hasn't hit puberty, so he's 'sent-home', like baseball players when 'balls-drop'.


Line #5) Imp is like a short person, lie means not telling the truth, also makes implied.
Line #10) In puberty, your balls drop, in baseball, if you drop the ball, the players get to walk.
If you don't get the rest of the wordplay don't vote, there's probably a wordplay in every line.

...........I Don't Know Who got this but both verses looked pretty tight.... Nice Shit.....

uppin # 1 .

uppin #2 .

I'm sick of this shit, I vote in 20 battles, and don't get any votes, you fucking selfish bitches.

O yea, uppin #3

vote you fucking cocklickers uppin #4 .

flow- brethren
punchlines- brethren
impact of disses- brethren
overall vote- brethren

this battle was one sided brethren came with better multies and punchlines.. peace

thanks, last upp #5 .