Haze- Last Breath
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/2dacribmusic.htm

Yea I know that beat rocked by many but not better then me.

ite beat sounds like an 80s remix lol, like the effect on the beginning.. sounds ill, damn shun .. nice .. UP ur Vocals tho .. Just a bit, Flow on point .. Like the topic man .. come wit the real lol, damn hook is ill wit that shit too it .. nice job fam .. mos def one of the better tracks here

"being Black is a gift but the life we live is a curse" Nice .. Im white but still that shit was ill lol

ite return the fav
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...011#post1090011

this sum ill shit dogg, kinda deep and gangsta at the same time....like that cat said before, jus speak up a lil and u got yaself an even bigger heater....stay up dogg...peace.

i liked this shit.. its just the beginnin.. i couldnt hear what ya said, w/ that filter... but the flow was dope man... u did rip this beat nicely, n im workin w/ this beat right now too... n wait for me to really rip it lol... this was nice.. this was dope...

this is honestly the best song I've heard in a while. I'm even counting my cd collection. Seriously, bringing this kind of political consciousness is something that really hits me. Good quality recording, great vocals, great lyrics flow and hook, overall a great song.

bump....

this shit was nice

i liked it a lot

i had replied already someone erased my post

good shit

This is a cat that is trying to make and put time into his songs
i like that
i strive to do the same

check my stuff out

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/t...sticatmusic.htm

If you can take time out to listen to Unstablefables(this is a song with my little bro-good editing)
and
The CfourD diss

I checked most the songs your really dope, you had a nice beat and a nice flow...i have a hard time doing that...yo in a crew though? Soft Focus needs adui heads...come check usout if ye want...it'd be a smart move peace man

^^^^already in audible!

haze this was real tight, flow was on point throughout n ur delivery was real emotion...very tight....gud topic, my opinion is that this is song of the week....pz dawg n keep droppin!

oohhh...never mind...didn't realise..sorry bout that

Thanks for the feedback fellas( or gurls) I hit up your link thephilosopher