Letter to The Worthy
 

1/15/04

Dear Worthy:
I am short on business, And needed to talk to Worthy
Seeing as, he's the only one to me, That is understanding
I may not be getting recognized, Through the other one's eyes
But no one ever takes the time, Im already Generalized
So I write to you in business, cuz time is the essence
The message, All my writing time has been Questioned
To the heart of Mines I put in the Eyes of all Yours
It's all Sore, And I only end up...Behind closed doors
The writing I took the Time, For others to See and not sleep
Was time Wasted, And Worthy might not even read it...
'For I always write to Worthy, And He doesn't ever want to Read

..Very short..alos..very nice...never read an bad piece from you... :cussing:

had a semi-morbid tone to me .. this was pretty ill though, kind of a poetry level somewhat. i don't know, i liked the last line even though you had a typo .. pz

Thanks...and up
Oh I fixed the typo there too

Nice and short..
You didn't drag out the content to long...
I liked how you portayed everything..
Like Sand said..it seemed more so poetically done..
Felt it..liked the last line..what you meant..Good idea...
Props...

yea did feel poetic but had the basis of a good peice as it did have afew nice bars

"To the heart of Mines I put in the Eyes of all Yours
It's all Sore, And I only end up...Behind closed doors"

^ flowed well with the internals and had nice imagery,as a whole the peice was short and poetic but felt emotion and had a good rhyme sceme.

Peace

Up Up Up And Away

Upp Agayne

Short , but a nice rhymesheme u used here, man .. good vocab usage, on the points were needed, to bad it was this short.. but it was nice man ..