Excedrin vs Rappin Master
 

aight 10 lines

ill spit first

no d/r
no hate
no feedin
no recycling

20 minutes to spit

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I will replace this freepost with a vote..

Rapping Master get at me, Good luck to both

This is the french revolution, ur marie antionette i'm the guillotine/
Choppin heads off, lacerations more grizzly than that memphis team/
Are u ready man? your face to face wit ammunition/
As I'm slammin A minor.. like an angered musician/
Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident/
Your style's like camera film you need to take time to develop it/
Your not ill, so you act dope like the Rock's stunt double's trouble with immigration/
If I came 1st or 2nd, you'd still get fucked either way like double penetration/
Ill plan ur demise blueprint 4 terror,...if u wanna harm me try it/
But fuckin wit me u destined 2 die like japanese kamikaze pilots/

i am not thinkin of my best these past few days
o well lets see his drop

im spittin 'hot shit' up in 'hells home' ~ youll be 'charged' a loss for this battle like the 'bill' for your cell phone
i 'flip modes' n switch my style up to 'bust a rhyme' ~ your new at this, what do you know bout 'punchin' lines ~ imma 'eat you up' as if you were shrooms at 'lunchtime'
im 'mental in the brain' like Saddam 'Whoz-sane?' ~ your ass is too new-for-this-game ~ step up n get 'played' like 'loose change'
skills and punches, ive got plenty-of-each ~ i pop pills in bunches, n iLL skills yall couldnt pay me a penny-to-teach
My mum could whack harder, face it you gone, no point in even speaking cos your replies take to long
yo mum is fast though, she does like to please, boy she did it last night, when she was down on her knees,
At rapping i am god, your whole rhyme is about to subside, cos wen jesus walked on water, i beat him to the other side

we did say 10 lines....cut it down to 10 please cuz they its aint fair
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heh @ double penetration line....... that camera line is played... iight verse



eh.... nothin that stands out here... didn't really like your structure/style. very predictable first line... really no punches....

Vote: Excedrin

This is unbiased,

Excederin came with played lines, I mean its good to read, But you as an mc didn't make them up, You bite practically every single one of them, RM here came with very few punches, but some lines were actually quite, it impressed me more than the other verse, Sinc eit wan't played, But neither had a solid flow, I mean it rhymed but didnt' flow, Both lines lacked punches, I'm voting for Rapping Matser purely for the reason his originality outshone Excederin like a motherfucker.. Slaps excederin for using a cum line* You are played as fuck.

Vote-Rapping matser.. Pz

sumthin is goin on wit this name lol

i got the same ip as mad people.

i think its cuz we use the same computers at school and they all hooked up together so its not individual

anyways i think that excedrin did win this because i thought he had an overall better verse.

potient is right though that some of ur lines are played...especially the sex bar...all sex lines are played

but the other guy didnt have anything interseting and his structure sucked

so ima have to go wit excedrin on this one

punches: Excedrin
flow: Rappin' Master
enjoyed: Both
humor:Rappin' Master
wordplay: Excedrin
personnals: Rappin' Master
voted for: Rappin' Master

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Thats how I alwayz vote so tell me I voted right? >=)

Lots of played bits. I'd vote Excedrin overall, stayed within the rules. Flow was off on both. At least Excedrin's seemed to flow between pairs of lines, but overall it was all over the place.

rapping master get at me, msn me or pm me,

This isn't a freepost, just keeping it up on top for you guys ;)

This was a decent battle..I was surprised...both of ya had some decent punches..and good flow..

Breakdown-

Punches-RM(Ex had good punches but they were played out)
Personals-Ex
Flow-Ex
Multis-Rm
Meta-Rm

..overall a decent battle..vote-Rm

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