Dialect OTYP vs Sergeant_Barwak
 

ok rules

no votes from:
crew haters d/rs or newb

no doin the followin:
feedin biting or recycling

checkin

verse do 30min after checkin

checkin asap

i will checkin after you so its a blind spit

get at me soon

fuck it im checkin drop by 10:30pm
get at me remeber rules verse is due by midnight anf 30min after check in

1...1....2....no worries im jus mic testin/
alls i did was post rules and he got scraed ta check in//
my verbal godges leave you scared bitch/
heres some advise, go on top a buildina n throw rocks so you can drop hard shit//
disregarde this, i aint even tryin at all no effort is bein put forth/
cuz i read this cats 1st battle so try ta win what for//
i blast these lyrics that hit you far back/
look at what he posted no wonder hes "bar-wak"//
you cant walk in these shoes youd trip and fall/
this dawg so weak i dont see why i spit at all//
bitch you wac what you spit is garbage/
i got caddates in my hood dat ull kill mr sergeant//
i blow up ya partridge ya lil beach house/
you bess turn it up before i squash you when i speak mouse//
i leave a deep godge and aint even touch you/
i mean ta kill you but thats somethin i must do//
see dawg give up cuz son you cant hurt this/
heres how the story goes, i win 5-0, then add u to my merk list//
cuz on this site you like bulk mail you have no purpose/
and ya ineffective hit dont hurt me so ya see what you drop is worthless//

get at me soon

mic testing about all you're good for
unless you want a new career as gay men's butt-whore
sure, you've battled here shitloads more
but I battle cold in da deadzone rapcore
year, my brain is switched-off today
otherwise you'd have no chance at all, e'say
let's look at what you said, wot? soon I'll be dead?
how you gonna manage that when I've cut off your head
with my ninja sword (came free with my Ford)
I will call you gimp and you can call me My Lord
before I finish you off, good
kick it like I should
you want a metal casket or do you much prefer wood?

you dumbass you broke two rules already
you didnt checkin wich i said to do and you was feedin i said not to do but dont worry bout it w/e next time u battle read the rules

o' and ya verse was to short gotta watch that mod get mad bout dat shit but is all kewl lets get votes

props.

hey, I don't even know what 'feeding' is! and I couldn't remember how many lines you wanted. I is shit. let's hear votes anyway.

kings overview

flow- dialect
structure- dialect
creativity- dialect
punches- dialect
personals- dialect
multis- ???

vote Dialect
dialect merked um in every aspect

yeah, king? flow? I admit it's good, but have you tried reading it out loud?