MARVOLoUsJ1009 VS Ozeki
 

No bull
10 lines
due in one hour
first to five...3-0 ko

yo, ya suffix is double 09 thats about what you weigh in at...
Eh, I heard this fag never leaves his house without his chin strap...
You a gimp cat... bitch you spittin hot air and still cant vent raps...
You pseudo, I heard you like to shake your bon bon like that kid from menudo...
You wack you on some new flows..cause i'll rip, eat, up-chuck, ralph, and re- chew those...
I'll tell you like this Marv-you-less, as in not enough, so aint really no use in actin tough...
you like a fake ass fiddy cent, tryna get buck, kid i'm tellin you right now it ain't no such luck..
step back wit them played wack poems...
you get burned at the stake for commin' to my battle feild like joan-cheaver bitch stay at home...
I'll run through that weak shit you spit like a yukon over a street cone...blah

jea!....

Listen...oz go head and act up i'll be in seattle dumpin da tech //
u gettin signed?nah ya career is like a "swoosh" its gon be "nothin but net" //
oz dont want it with jay cuzz i could draw 2 5ths,but dogg u bitch //
if everybody on da site caught a "cold" and "daiLed ya number" they wouldnt "call u sick" //
but fuck da talkin i'll move on ya gang //
and when da tool clap ima "shoot" at ya head like its a "hoop" on ya brain //
or put ya dome in da sky and make u "think in da air" like "school on a plane" //
u da scary type dat a reach 4 ya hip and fold //
but im just waitin 4 u da comeout ya face" alot like "pipen's nose" //
so i could come 2 oz crib and put "metal" on dis "pussy" like "stripper pole's" //

dammm can u niggaz vote.............................................. ..................................

damm i know dis wasn't da best on da da site but damm niggaz cant vote on our shit..................

marblelessj1009 how many time you gonna use that fake weak ass shit you be kicken? you fuckin lame~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

close battle.my vote goes to Ozeki better alround,beta puches.
vote:Ozeki

Flow=Ozeki, his was just a lot easier to read, and flowed nicer.

Punches=Ozeki, both were good, but Ozekis just hit a bit harder.

Personals=I'm gona say tie, neither really focused on personals.

Metas= Marvo, he had metas everywhere.

Vocab=Tie, neither put to much vocab in there.

Over all=Ozeki his was just a better over all drop

Ozeki, started off with the better opener, Marv's yours was weak... Oz, also had a better flow going, Marv you need to even yours up a bit... the wordplay was ok, but a bit played i thought, from both.... so it comes down to the punches, which ive got to give to Ozeki, they were more consistant,...... so vote=Oz.... didnt think it was a very strong battle tho...