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Mmmmm i just broke up with my gf, she didnt really give me a reason just that old friends crap so i quickly wrote up this.......peace

Ayo im sorry am i not good enough?
It's not like i give a fuck, but i really do
I want u to know how much i that i loved u
Why the fuck did u lie, i feel worthless
Tryin not to cry, Wish i that i could just die
But it's meaningless, Are u fuckin heartless?
Try not to think about it,or i feel like shit
A joint is lit, A cask of goon is drank
I wanna thank u for giving me this oppotunity
It's like this bitch has a feelings immunity
U confused me, Yesterday u said u loved me
I aint good enough u prolly think you're above me
No one helps me to feel better, doesnt matter
If i was gone would u fucks have remorse?
Of course not, If i was shot?or i i was hangin?
So i drink my self stupid and leave tupac bangin
Of course i loved u but u led me on, How?
Buy sayin u loved me, u make me feel foul

you got your feelings well across in this.... it would have been better tho if ya constructed the verse different, with a better scheme, cos it seemed pretty basic... but the message was clear so.....decent

mmm it took me like 2 minutes to do but i could have dragged on about shit but non e of you would have got any of it since u dont know me personally^^^but thanks

uppin

Nah fucka this peice its wack anyways.....I was a bit emotional last ngith

the emotion in this piece was there...

but yea a little basic...ever thought bout puttin this in the poetry...?
cause this had kind of a poetry feel...

decent drop tho...